Est ce que tenten était obligée de savoir que hinata avait embrassé naruto sérieux je pense que certaines scènes devraient rester secrètes pour rendre l'histoire un peu jolie

This is one of the few Naruto fanfictions that isn’t garbage thank you

Honestly one of the best stories I have read on this site. You write from the 1st person point of view extremely well. I really feel like I am in the life of Hinata as I am reading. I felt like I was fainting at the end of this chapter lol. I'm really interested in seeing where the plot goes from here. I'm sure you had in mind to show more of people's reactions to the the relationship. I can see quite a few different potential conflicts that can make for some good storylines: Hiashi not approving of the relationship (and possibly wanting to marry Hinata off), Takuma being an antagonist in some form (most likely wanting Hinata to throw a coup), someone attacking Gaara's wedding and sending the nations into chaos (that would be an arc within itself), etc. You have quite an opportunity on your hands and I can only hope that you continue!

Y’all-did I really just. WTF. ITS BEEN 4 YEARS SINCE TGEYVE UPDATED LMAO RIP ITS OVERREE

Nooooooooo, i need more :(

When will chapter 13 come?

Ahhh! The plot thickens! I could see the Tenten/Kiba coming, I just didn't expect it to happen like this.

I'm really looking forward to their date, I'm very curious about what Naruto did.

I really liked the POV change, it was an excellent change up.

This is great overall, though. I really like how relaxed and fluffy it is.

I like your Tenten, she's sarcastic in the best way. It's hilarious.

This story is great so far. Definitely loving it and looking forward to more. The romance is adorable, and I sincerely hope you're not abandoning this.

Let me start by saying I am thoroughly enjoying this story so far. However, there is an inconsistency that needs fixed. I just read the note on chapter 8, so I know why it's like this. However, in chapter 6, Naruto and Hinata arrange their date for "this Sunday". Here in chapter 7, Hinata mentions the date being "next Saturday". Like I said, I know why from next chapter's note, but this needs fixing.

please update! I'm dying to know what the hyuuga clan wants. and I wanna see more NaruHina romance.

The fainting is OK, especially here, If I were her I would definitely faint!
Please, continue this story, I know that when you left something for a long time you just lose either interest or motivation, but I wanted to let you know that I think this story is a masterpiece and I would live to keep reading this story.

The Kiba-Ten thing doesn't bother me at all, actually in canon both of them are lonely and I wouldn't mind that they could also get a little bit of love.
Of course that I would keep on reading the next chapter. I see is the last one and you haven't updated in a long time, heck, I don't even now if you still plan on keep writing this story but if you do I could die happily. To much drama right? Sorry.
Saludos desde México

I really love stories with Naruto's POV because he is so sincere and loud (even in his mind) and when he thinks about Hinata my inner self just squeals, lol. You did great my friend!
The only thing that was weird is that Naruto was telling everybody about his almost sex night, idk maybe is because I wouldn't do that, but it's Naruto! The more unpredictable ninja, so I guess it makes sense.
I just love your writing, you are awesome!