Reviews for The First Born
Queenofthecornflakes chapter 1 . 5/31/2015
I Love it 3 The way Jasper is Acting...it's just Perfect
*-* Bellamy and Clarke...awesome..
Sorry that it's so Short but i'm German and my english is...yeah lets just say it's definatly not perfect :)
Star197 chapter 1 . 2/13/2015
Jasper and Octavia are so perfect together :)
amy chapter 1 . 9/29/2014
loved this story, you are a very good writer.
byzinha chapter 1 . 5/30/2014
I loved it! It's hard to find fanfics for the 100 and I'm glad I found yours. I love Jasper (and it probably has something to do with the fact that Dev plays his role, because I didn't read the book) and I really want to see how they're going to portray his relationship with Octavia. Right now, it seems it's gonna be slow build. I hope so, I hope they don't rush, I hope they follow a path like the one you did.
ElisaCollette chapter 1 . 5/26/2014
Beautiful little one-shot. I think you wrote it very well and kept everyone in character but showed them having matured over the years. It was completely believeable that Octavia would have to be dragged to see the doctor - I could just see that perfectly. It was adorable, the way you described Bellamy holding his new niece. Just an overall wonderful story! If the 100 fandom continues to grow with well-conceived fanfic pieces such as yours, I look forward to reading more of it.
AshleyLynn29 chapter 1 . 5/26/2014
You should write one about clarke and bellamy having kids :)
Emowyen chapter 1 . 4/28/2014
I wish this fandom was larger too! Looking forward to it getting bigger! Hope you write more for Clarke and Bellamy. I think they have amazing chemistry and if they finally united would make an amazing couple but also a very formidable team as leaders. Can't wait to read more!
Kalibee22 chapter 1 . 4/24/2014
great future fic! Loved it :) please write some more...pleeeeeeease! I'd love to read more about Clarke and Bellamy's happy ending
Grande Asperge chapter 1 . 4/23/2014
We want more of that! Love it :)
Rosalie smith chapter 1 . 4/23/2014
Wow; quite a hint u dropped there. I really liked this story. I don't know whether or not you plan to expand on it but I'd love to read more. I think u have all the characters spot on, especially Octivia. As the show goes on Octivia is probably going to be exactly like u described her. Strong and kind but still on the wild and outspoken side of things.
urmyluv chapter 1 . 4/23/2014
Loved it! And I completely agree with you on everything :)
Guest chapter 1 . 4/23/2014
I love your story it was really sweet.. I hope you can continue this but with more of bellamy and clarke.. They are my new favorite couple :D
eyes-and-a-tail chapter 1 . 4/23/2014
Its so good! i need moreee
B.Cochrane chapter 1 . 4/23/2014
Oh it think that is the sweets fanfic jasper and octavia are so cute and now i know im not the only one who think clarkes should be with bellamy
bookiecookie chapter 1 . 4/23/2014
This was so good! Keep going