Reviews for My Immortal |
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Maru2019 chapter 4 . 5/21 ok...this is the only fic where i felt compelled to review every chapter; i wish you had written a sequel/alternative ending for the og story |
Maru2019 chapter 3 . 5/21 I wish I could forget this story just so I could re-experience reading it again. out of everything i have read so far, i think this is most true to the og |
Maru2019 chapter 2 . 5/21 I really like how you wrote wade; so many other stories make him openly hostile, and that makes me sad |
Maru2019 chapter 1 . 5/20 I am so glad you did not leave this as a one-shot! |
Maru2019 chapter 5 . 5/19 This is so intense and sadly went by too quick; if you ever see this comment, I hope you continue! |
Windyandstormy chapter 5 . 11/20/2019 Amazing writing |
gabyhyatt chapter 4 . 4/26/2019 I love this fic. It' s so well done. I hope you update soon. |
Francis-rose chapter 5 . 4/21/2019 I love this story please finish it |
gumper chapter 4 . 11/21/2018 Ok so I love this story - keep re-reading it hoping for some epiphany - but fear I may be as obtuse as Scarlett... I don’t typically yearn for a lot of smut, but my latest thought is that a little bit more detail on exactly how their physical reunion (first time after what? 8 years or so?) went down might have shed some more light... He’s back and has accepted it - she’s his fate... but wait a minute - what if Belle WAS still alive. Would he have gone there first - or worse yet after she sneaked out and went home? He’s got a pretty good alibi for the prison years - but what about before? And what about telling only Belle? He left her (and her children) high and dry for a really really long time..,can he really just walk back in like this? (Well I guess he can given that he ended up in bed with Scarlett despite her protestations..) And what of Scarlett / can she truly accept this new reality after so many years? Can she possibly start anew with this man absent any rehash of the past with long overdue apologies for a number of fairly serious and never examined transgressions? Can she even safely have a baby at 35 and following that fall/miscarriage? What exactly do those sad smiles mean in the long run for these two? Ah well, it’s probably the perfect ending just as it stands. |
gabyhyatt chapter 5 . 7/24/2018 Great fic |
starlite22 chapter 3 . 5/3/2018 Please update soon |
Guest chapter 5 . 12/9/2016 I want more ! Please at least 1 more chapter am loving wade too and want to know how he feels aboutr&s reconciling |
Kayla chapter 5 . 10/7/2016 Oh, this story is delightful. Such a fun and believable way to imagine tori reunion. Thanks for sharing. |
gumper chapter 5 . 7/23/2016 This is so great - thank you - would love a follow up! |
starlite22 chapter 4 . 2/8/2016 Please add what happens next, did they get back together? Did they have another kid? Did they move to TAra? |