O MY GOSH this is one of the best stories I've ever read, no joke, it made me feel things man. Plus you portrayed Envys character really well! Great job!

This fic was really amazing. I loved it. Definitely something I will be reading over and over again.

I was down from the beginning, and then when I read that it was Envy. That had my mind blown; I though there was no way this fic could be good with Envy as the love interest. But the arch into a carring character was so organic. This fic just gives me good vibes man. And then I didn’t even know till I read some comments that Envy and Ed get shipped. Definitely going to look for another, but I know I won’t find one as good as this. (I know AL’s got his body in this one but I’m still picturing )

thanks for caring seriously you'er the first one to care and i respect you for that

Dude holy shiT this is amazing

This was awesome. I can't even - oh screw this, I WILL like this story!

FUCK NO GOOD BYE IM OUT

I didn't know hospital bed sheets hissed.

Sarcasm...

This I amazing! I know you wrote it like, two years or something ago, but it's really amazing! :D

I hate how you left it dangling like that, but it was better than the other fic where envy killed himself. That one fucked me up.

This is beautiful

That was probably the best edvy fic I have ever read. It was amazing! Thanks for weiting.

That's it? That's the end!?

I was...kinda hoping for a little more closure than this. The ending as-is just seems so...abrupt.

Ah well...it's a good story, even if the ending isn't wholly satisfying to me.

I really loved the story. thank you so much for writting it.

This was one of the best ed x envy fics out there! The plotline was really good, and the characters werent OOC.
I do wish there was another chapter to the ending, but the current one is really good.
Overall I think that this was a really awesome fic.