Cool fic so far! hope it will be continued.

I look forward to more :)

More please

Awesome x

Oliver when it rains it really pours for you.

That has to hurt to be on the other side of the glass looking in but never interacting for fear of putting her family and friends in danger.

Something chaotic like that happens in your loved ones life, yeah you will most definitely be distracted.

I'll be honest with you- I could barely read this chapter. It's VERY disjointed and scattered; I don't know when new scenes are starting or where characters come from. I'm not sure what happened here, but I've never had these problems before.

There story has me so intrigued.

I like your story. Big Nyssara fan but honestly it was very hard to read at times. I would kindly suggest using this app to help make your story flow better in terms of grammar. Hemingway is a writing checker that is absolutely brilliant.

checks all spellings for you
checks if you’re over-using adverbs
picks out over-complicated sentences
suggests replacements for over-complicated phrases
picks out the passive voice
tells you how readable your text is (Grades/College level/etc)
calculates reading time

I think I like your story but it is honestly hard to tell because I can't understand most of it...
You should really ask someone to correct your English before posting a chapter, they are very hard to read!

Really good chapter but you need to learn how to stop using so much past tense, Good story anyway, I always love to see Nyssa be A badass XD

I love this :) im sooooooo happy to have fund this

Great chapter!

omg loving this fic