I like it please continue

not bad, wonder who else is going to be in this story.(girls and otherwise).

Take your time. I’m not going anywhere.

Can you also do Spawn x RWBY crossover if you like Spawn? It can be about that Max Simmons son of Al Simmons was given the K7-Leetha to form his own path. Max used his suit and accidentally activated a portal and dragged himself into a world of Grimm and Huntsman. Max was very confused of the world he was in but then he began to read the history of this world about the relationships between humans and faunus who are half human half animal and he was shocked at all this. One day he saw a girl in a red hood getting attacked by criminals so he began to help her and after that Ozpin offered them to attend at the Beacon Academy and they both accepted it. Once he has gotten used to this new world and make new friends he will do everything in his power to protect his friends and this world as the new Hell Spawn. And while he’s training at Beacon he will earn some love with Blake Belladona and Nore Valkyrie. Meanwhile when the time comes he will also get visited by a figure who as a suit that is similar to his and it’s the Redeemer and the Redeemer will be allied with Cinder and Salem to take down the Hell Spawn.
Pair: OC x Blake (main), Nora, Kali Belladonna and Sienna Khan

Immersion is constantly in flux in this fic

Glad tio see you're back man, i missed ya. Whenever i see you updated one of your stories i dropped everything that wasnt important in comparison to a new chapter, basically everything. Anyway, I'm super stoked to read more of your work

I look forward to the next chapter.

ok

This is boring i already watched the show so what is the point if you will not change anything ?

...I just realized you haven't updated this in over a year.

*stares at you expectantly*

I'm waiting!

Warm regards,

~Nz.

Is it wrong that Trigon terrifies me?

I've seen what he can do in other literature and its not pretty.

And weird partners indeed!

Warm regards,

~Nz

Chocolate fountain, eh?

And remember, its important to space things out, my friend! Avoid using these "as, who, and then, that, who, was" as much as humanly possible! I'd be happy to give you some pointers if you like.

Also, apparently I'm an Uncle now 0_0

Gotta go!

Warm regards,

~Nz

The stomping had me in freaking stitches.

Now this is more my style!

Warm regards,

~Nz

Ah, Living Tombstone.

Good times.

Ahem!

Onto the review. This really was...a bit darker than I expected. Not sure how to feel about that. I've yet to play Evil Within myself, now I'm kinda dreading it...

Hmm...spaces are important, I feel the need to impart that.

Run-on sentences are a big no-no as well but the plot is progressing nicely.

And I have yet to see any flamers on here myself, so...

Warm regards,

~Nz