Reviews for The Trajectory of Laughter
YaoiFan22 chapter 21 . 3/8
Love to Omake! It's great.
Theboss786 chapter 6 . 2/11
GORO lets go i love major
Theboss786 chapter 3 . 1/11
sawamura pitches in the 130s
jinangelicaalcantara chapter 2 . 12/6/2019
are you fucking serious! this is ridiculous myghod fuck all i read this story didn't give some fucking sense.
maple9300 chapter 46 . 8/22/2019
Wanted to say my thoughts on the epilogue in the last chapter here, because apparently you can't comment/review twice.

Before I read the rest of the comments, I assumed just the same. One could only imagine what happened to the Sawamura who traveled to the past. What struck me in the epilogue was the person, who said that one line, in addition to his description. The person who stood crooked before standing straighter. The person who'd been waiting. The person, who I could only assume, was future Miyuki. And the person who ran towards him, was the Sawamura that we'd been following throughout the whole story.

Time is a cruel thing. But regardless of wherever their past and future selves ended up, they found each other in the end. (Teared up writing that last bit)

I'm glad to see they're doing well. I said time was cruel, but it seemed to do some good for them.

This was actually my first time ever really reading a fanfic, and I'm glad that yours was my first. (~If this was ever published in book format, I would so buy it. It's just that amazing~)

I binged the rest and now it's 7 AM. I ought to sleep now. Thanks again! This story will definitely have a special place in my heart.
maple9300 chapter 45 . 8/22/2019
Truthfully it wasn't the ending I expected, not that I knew what to expect, anyway. Sawamura wouldn't regain his old memories, and the whole time-travel aspect would remain hidden from the members of Seidou, and Miyuki.

It gave me a serious scare when Miyuki collided with the runner at home plate. Again. I was really scared that the world was ending again, and thankfully, it didn't.

Anywho, it was a rather bittersweet ending that had its own charm to it. Miyuki retains his memories of the 'old' Sawamura, and Sawamura retains no memories of his time at Seidou at all. The way I see it, everything seems to have returned to square one. Sawamura will just fall in love with Miyuki all over again. I find myself grateful that at the very least, they're both alive in this timeline.

Thank you for this wonderful story.
maple9300 chapter 44 . 8/22/2019
I seriously -still- have no idea what to even think. My mind is blank; I can't come up with an speculation or conclusion...somehow I just can't see this ending well...at all...and...the photograph that had -completely- crossed my mind...Eijun's sudden tears...I just can't...
maple9300 chapter 43 . 8/22/2019
I have no idea what to think right now...but WHAT THE FACK? I...I...what's going on...
maple9300 chapter 42 . 8/21/2019
Flashes of fading memories in between each out that Eijun threw.

His seemingly wave and words of farewell.

I am deeply concerned.
maple9300 chapter 41 . 8/21/2019
I was just laughing in the first half. Y'all can try to steal, but not when Miyuki's the catcher. IT AIN'T HAPPENIN' LOL

It felt like this is the reverse of what happened in the anime, which I found cool; this time, instead of Seidou, Inashiro just needed one more out to end the game, but Seidou tied up with them, leading to the extra innings!
maple9300 chapter 40 . 8/21/2019
Amazing game descriptions as always!

For some reason, I initially thought that Furuya injured his elbow (?) instead of his wrist; I probably misread something.

And Kuramochi's steal came out of nowhere, it really surprised me; I didn't know it was possible (until now) that one could steal under such conditions! Usually I see steals when pitchers enter their pitching motion, but to think it'd happen during a throwback to the pitcher nonetheless...that was a ballsy move!
maple9300 chapter 39 . 8/21/2019
Yep, I definitely feel something bad about to happen. We're not out of the hole yet .

These frequent headaches, with bouts of memory loss; not to mention that Furuya seems to be injured...ahh I'm at the edge of my seat!
maple9300 chapter 38 . 8/21/2019
Miyuki knows he's in too deep, and I'm over here laughing myself off.

Man, I can still remember watching the first season finals, and the moment when Shirakawa was hit by Sawamura's pitch...it's still traumatizing to remember.

Revenge time!
maple9300 chapter 37 . 8/21/2019
As I read the end of the chapter I realized that that was the last phone call Sawamura shared with Miyuki.

His last words..."Thank you."

I have no words...Miyuki TT
maple9300 chapter 36 . 8/21/2019
This chapter had me so emotional. At one point I was super...SUPER flustered and blushing out of my mind upon reading the sensual, suggestive descriptions of what was happening, then I was on the verge of crying for my boys, and then I found myself laughing off.

And I also JUST realized the parallel between Miyuki and Sawamura's thoughts, when they both regarded each other, talking about how they were different, and yet one in the same!

I have my faith in you author, all I can do it pray right now that this all ends well.
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