This was actually very good, interesting plot. I liked Lisa’s sarcastic and realistic view and personality made it more reasonable when she grew closer to Loki. Great story!

This was an absolutely wonderful story! I loved how well written it was and how spotless the characters interactions were. It is certainly one of my favorite stories up to date.

This story was so well written I read it in an entire day without stopping. The story was intricate and detailed, the dry and witty humor had me grinning and laughing aloud, and the characters were on point. This was an amazing story, definitely one of my favorite Avengers stories to date.

Wow... Now I like loki

I really loved this story! It was so excellent and it deserves so many more reviews!

Wow! What a story! Definitely one of my favourite! Loved it !

oh like lay lines

this was so beautiful! I mean really. this moved me. your character development was fantastic. and I really wish Lisa was canon because she fit in so well and was awesome. and I love loki and Lisa's back and forth wit battles. you wrote all the characters perfectly. I could pretty much hear them saying all this because it sounds so very much like them. I hope to read other stories by you. you have a fan in me. keep on keeping on.

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Oh boy, here we go! This is going to be an excellent and awesome ride! Way to go!

I haven't read the chapter just the author's note and had to review right away! First happy verrry belated birthday! Second, Congratulations on sobriety for so long, I only recently have decided to do it as well, a month strong for me! Love the quote, hit me in the feels! I'm just adoring this story as well, been binge reading XD not looking forward to ending it lol

I enjoyed your story. Usually with LokiXOC fics either the OC is a normal human (related to SHIELD) or an Asguardian of some sort (normally Sigyn). Your story is the first I have read where Loki ends up with someone of his own race. Sure she was raised human, but in the end she is a Frost Giant. Nice idea there. Thank you for writing and sharing.

This was by far one of the best stories I've read on this website :)

This was a story I can describe as 'refreshing'. It was appropriate parts humourous, serious, romantic, and interesting, and I have to say that I'm quite smitten with your protagonist, as she came across as unassuming, yet relatable and memorable. I think, to be honest, that I will remember Lisa long after I have forgotten what the plot to this was.

I will say that I would have enjoyed a more climactic... climax, but I suppose it wasn't awful. It just lacked a lot of the 'oomf' I was expecting from this super powerful, immortal, well-armed antagonist after all the build up. The anti-Thor action sequence was definitely the most engagingly written. With the Collecter, however, it seemed you lacked some inspiration? It was very well thought out and researched, just a little rushed.

In one plot building book, it said that when planning your climax, or Black Moment, an author ought to think of the absolute WORST thing that could happen to the characters in terms of Story Goal, make it even worse, and then times it by three. While I certainly appreciated the stakes, Lisa's comatose state (executed beautifully, might I add), zombie Thor, fake thingy-stones, Nick Fury being his usual obtuse self, for stakes so high it seemed just /too easy/ for Loki to save the day (which I still loved immensely if I'm honest to my smitten self).

Anyway, that's my two cents, writer to writer. In the end this was a pleasure to read, and I hope it was even half as enjoyable to write! I hope to read more of your work in the near future.

This is beautiful. They should make a movie after your stories, or at least give Loki a love interest in some future Avengers movie.