How did Hermione recognize Neville at the bookstore? Was Neville mentioned in some books? Has he got any identification mark?

11 years old are not acting like 11 years old. I don't think Hermione Granger was exactly like Lily Evans. If Hermione's grandmother was a witch then how could she be a muggleborn?

Nice good

I think you should keep the characters the way they are. Maybe make harry a littlte less cock but otherwise I love it!

You asked for a review, so here it is: this story is not good. At all. I'm glad I'm able to leave now and that it's not required of me to finish it. Life is too short.

You are doing very well. I'm greatly enjoying the story. My only hope for the story is that the New Marauders realize soon that Ron is not good for them. I think the 4th member should be Seamus. Also it might be nice if Harry does learn a little more humility soon. :-) Especially if he wants to get the girl. I'm really enjoying the House Unity plot line. Other than the one part I mentioned I wouldn't change anything. Good luck with your senior year and may you enjoy college when you go.

Options 1 & 2 please!

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

What is it with so many short chapters? Why is it so hard for people in general to understand that stories need substance? The skit at the start before the story is nothing more than wasted space. The note at the end maybe a little understandable but still has nothing to do with the actual story. Come on your suppose to be hooking me onto the story but your barely even peaking my interest.

Dear Golden Keeper,

Please update this story soon. It is fantastic!

Cheers,
OScar

Please update soon.

This FanFic is simply... amazing! And you're like the next J.K. Rowling ;)

I like the twists you've added and the turn of events was simple exhilarating. And somehow, I have this gut feeling that Hermione (she's my favorite HP character as well) will play a bigger role in this story. I could not say it's bigger than Harry, though.

And when I got to the seventh chapter, I almost fell off my bed from laughing so hard. And I love the idea of Hermione, Lavender and the Patil Twins as the female counterparts of the Mauraders - but I'm guessing now that you won't go farther than the mere prank. But, seriously, the prank they performed on Harry and his friends was wicked.

I love Hermione's line: "Time to witch up and be a Gryffindor."

I was a bit saddened that the ninth chapter wasn't an update. But that doesn't mean that I'm not overly excited for the next chapter.

All in all, this story is brilliantly written. I'm looking real forward to your next installment.

Keep up the good work. :)

P.S. Good luck with the school work. I can relate on you. :)

Well we all understand at least I do I still have a crashed laptop. I will wait till the next chapter.

Owh hope you can fix your computer soon, so we all can enjoy your fabulous new chapter :)

Btw I'm the new reader to your story and I just want to say good luck and love your story so much :D

Mischief manage, over and out

I definitely love where your going with this story I look forward to more so sorry about your laptop that in itself is a major loss I am going through the same thing with my tablet and laptop I am sending this review on my phone btw hermione is my favorite character. As a fellow bookworm her character is awesome. I always thought her and harry would get together after reading the books and seeing the movies I could swear thats what it was build up to I personally think her and ron are the worst couple and would probably kill each other if left completely alone. Keep up the great work