Love it continue plz

Well, this was good. I actually wanted it to continue but it's been a long time since it's been updated. Thank you. Also, nice nickname.

There was a little pin there within what kronos said

Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!

Continue.

Where's the poll?

How can a goddess be fatally wounded? Kinda beats the entire point of being an IMMORTAL GODDESS!

Buddy i don't know if you already have but, what you think about get a beta reader to help you?

Please don't stop writing
But please try and make the chapters longer

I can't wait for the next chapter!

That summary has everything I avoid in a story. Some variation of betrayal, hunters, guardian, chaos, primordial sand less than 1000 words per chapter. I didn't even read the chapter but from what I saw it's the same crap as a thousand others. Just terrible.

Update Please!

'I had just killed Kronos,' what the hell? First Perseus' character is not meant to boast. Furthermore the fight was much to easy to be anywhere near to being near to being realistic. Also what does, 'I gave Artemis my "demigodly" [which is not a real word by the way - I checked in the Oxford English Dictionary] essence' actually mean. I hope this improves drastically or I will stop reading this and I will send you a review describing every point that is bad and unrealistic and metaphorically disgusting about this text - even though it is fan fiction, I expect it to be top-notch.

How the hell does Kronos just appear in a flash of light.

Good story