i was reading your 2012 storys and noticed that your english had improved a lot!
great work!

thank you! i really love your Legolas and Elrohir. maybe a sequel...

Aw, I'm a little sad that this is complete, but it was a nice ending :D

Congratulations at finishing :D The ending is a bit open but that's all right :)

aww this such cute and good storty please update soon

Yay!
It was longer than usual :D
Elladan with his jaw hanging is funny

Interesting... I didn't expect this turn of events :D

It was a nice chapter
I was missing Saelbeth, it's good to have him back!

It was nice. I liked it! :D

Really like how Erestor come up with the plan to let Thranduil extended his stay without embarassing himself hahahaha

Aahh... can't wait for the next chapter! Looking forward for Dan/Mel story, so cute

I loved the chapter.
Poor Mel. And Thranduil; with all that teasing... I see that Erestor is still the master of words.
I want to read more...

Wow, as much as I am happy to finally have reached this point I can only think that it must be the most awkward night ever for Mel and Elladan. To share your bed while your twin brother is having the time of his life must be uncomfortable. And Mel... to hear all that and be unable to move as you please...
I can imagine all of them mortified the next morning- one pair because they heard it all and the other because they just realized that they were could have been heard. Well, at least Dan didn't interrupt this time!
But most of all, I want to see Thranduil reaction to this development. Especially if he sees Elrohir's love mark in his son's neck.
Hope you uodate soon! :D

Whoa, does Thranduil hate Elrohir? Or is he a overprotective father?
I hope to see Legolas's reaction. And everyone's by the way.
And now that Legolas has said that he loves Elrohir, can he say it to Elrohir? After so many chapter it would be nice for Elrohir to hear it.
Hope you update soon

Agh! How could you leave it there? I wanted to see Elrohir's reaction...
Let's hope the Elvenking approves this time. Although I would like to see him terrifying Elrohir.

It's good to see Glorfindel again. I was starting to miss him too :D

Valar! Esta perfeito! O que Thranduil faz em Imladris?