I thought he put his favorite gun and knife in the BOX/BIN before he was allowed into Bella's house? Chapter Four Paragraph 11. If you can even consider those one liners paragraphs that is. Also please get a beta for this your grammar is all over the place. God, I'd forgotten how bad this was until I'd started re-reading it out of shear boredom, today. That doesn't surprise me though seeing as your others aren't much better, but this is just... Missing words, can't stick to a particular tense in a paragraph let a sentence at times, misspelled words, misused words, sentences that don't make sense... Shall I go on?

This was brilliant.

It sounds like the killer is Aro. I mean to mention that on the chapter before. I have a feeling he is going to hack the security equipment at bella’s. I also think he isn’t on his own and the tech guy or bug guy , who got hit, is maybe a brother and he gets the inside scoo.

I chuckled at your AN...I'm one of those who got over their fears of reading this story. Only I see from the date on the story that it has taken me over five years to do so. Thanks for the story.

This is a great one. I love to reread around Halloween.

Loved loved this. The relationship between Bella& Edward plus all the great supporting characters. Thank you so much.

Exciting thriller. Loving it.

I thought it went great!

Lol. I already thought I knew who it was... now I'm not so sure!

Oh no, more trauma! All these years of thinking Renee couldn't be bothered to get in touch, which has got to hurt, but for most of them, she was dead!

Faark. Tense!

Gah! I knew it was going to be Alice!

I came back for a reread because I just love this one. Thanks for sharing.

Thanks for writing this wonderful story!

Thanks for sharing this page turner!