Reviews for Paradise
Tracy chapter 12 . 3/13
Will you be finishing this story or any of your others? I truly enjoy reading your stories and would love for MORE. If not, thank you for sharing your talents with us and hopefully can read more of your work soon! Thanks! Loved ALL of them!
meeeeouch chapter 7 . 2/3/2019
I knew she was pregnant
CLHB chapter 12 . 7/4/2018
Good story, I hope you update soon. Thanks!
Guest Denie chapter 12 . 3/9/2018
Grt story...just hoping you finish it with HEA!
dcschak12Yahoo.com chapter 12 . 2/14/2018
I am not sure if you'll ever pick this story up, again ( although I truly hope you do). It was a fantastic read and I love your twist on the background of the characters. I especially loved that Ella was his mother.
I love the idea of "what could have been" had she stayed alive. I loved all the twists and turns of your story. If you ever go back to it, it will be truly a great treat. Thank you for writing it.
rcjr3905 chapter 12 . 2/12/2018
I hope you continue this story
Kim chapter 12 . 2/4/2018
I believe since it’s near 3 years you won’t update ?
the-power-of-love chapter 12 . 10/11/2017
Food story update soon
Jen1072 chapter 12 . 8/8/2017
Hello was just wondering if you was going to update or finish this story? Thanks for writing.
Siopipao chapter 12 . 7/6/2017
All I can say is, "Wow!" This is really one of the best fanfictions I have ever read. My only problem is that, is it still possible for you to continue this story? This is really great one. I hope you continue to finish this.
vickiel2r chapter 12 . 5/18/2017
Big news for Christian. So happens next. When will you update again. Maybe a closing chapter would be good but you can continue for more. It is a very good story and all are your own. Only the names from Fifty was used. Please continue and thank you.
vickiel2r chapter 11 . 5/18/2017
She was used by her boss, the naive Ana little did she know, she was just going to be a mistress, a kept woman and promises that never materialized.
vickiel2r chapter 10 . 5/18/2017
Anastasia needs to decide she is conflicted and depressed losing a life, a product of them both. Christian needs to respect her space and give her support. How long was she involved with Callahan?
vickiel2r chapter 9 . 5/18/2017
A failed pregnancy, the fetus is dead before he even new he would be a father. Product of a wild night but they had unexplained instantaneous connections. The pregnancy mattered to him, he would not have denied it. But all Christian could do now is to support Ana.
vickiel2r chapter 8 . 5/18/2017
Is she pregnant?. She is fuller he noticed, she did not drink alcohol, she was heaving in the bathroom. Time to find out.
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