Reviews for Hopeless |
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Pierce chapter 16 . 7/7 The story was fine, but a lil' erotica would have been nice. I kept reading and I only saw more torture , blood, and etc... With a beautiful woman like J.J., rape is inevitable and one's imagination for pain & torture could come from awesome sex ! |
CM6SHIELD6PLL6 chapter 16 . 10/12/2014 That was really good. Maybe you could write a sequal |
Guest chapter 16 . 8/15/2014 Omg, that last paragraph tho... |
GottaLoveCM chapter 16 . 7/11/2014 OMG I NEED MORE OF THIS! |
Kayla chapter 16 . 6/12/2014 well written and engaging but your ending needs work. Its a bit 2 sudden and rushed. A proper conclusion is needed. fun read tho. |
Michelle0987 chapter 16 . 6/10/2014 Love this story. |
Guest1979 chapter 1 . 6/6/2014 Update soon! Love this! |
Demi3456 chapter 16 . 6/5/2014 Can't wait for the next chapter |
guest chapter 16 . 6/3/2014 Glad they find a pulse update soon. |
sander9876 chapter 16 . 5/31/2014 Love the story update soon |
guest chapter 15 . 5/28/2014 I hope jj makes it Henry needs her. |
Stelena91 chapter 15 . 5/28/2014 Hope jj don't die update soon. |
alderson chapter 15 . 5/28/2014 I hope she'll be okay, great chapter. |
starr2cole chapter 13 . 5/23/2014 Please continue |
Stelena91 chapter 13 . 5/18/2014 I love the story please continue it jj and morgan are awesome. |