Reviews for Hopeless
Pierce chapter 16 . 7/7
The story was fine, but a lil' erotica would have been nice. I kept reading and I only saw more torture , blood, and etc... With a beautiful woman like J.J., rape is inevitable and one's imagination for pain & torture could come from awesome sex !
CM6SHIELD6PLL6 chapter 16 . 10/12/2014
That was really good. Maybe you could write a sequal
Guest chapter 16 . 8/15/2014
Omg, that last paragraph tho...
GottaLoveCM chapter 16 . 7/11/2014
OMG I NEED MORE OF THIS!
Kayla chapter 16 . 6/12/2014
well written and engaging but your ending needs work. Its a bit 2 sudden and rushed. A proper conclusion is needed. fun read tho.
Michelle0987 chapter 16 . 6/10/2014
Love this story.
Guest1979 chapter 1 . 6/6/2014
Update soon! Love this!
Demi3456 chapter 16 . 6/5/2014
Can't wait for the next chapter
guest chapter 16 . 6/3/2014
Glad they find a pulse update soon.
sander9876 chapter 16 . 5/31/2014
Love the story update soon
guest chapter 15 . 5/28/2014
I hope jj makes it Henry needs her.
Stelena91 chapter 15 . 5/28/2014
Hope jj don't die update soon.
alderson chapter 15 . 5/28/2014
I hope she'll be okay, great chapter.
starr2cole chapter 13 . 5/23/2014
Please continue
Stelena91 chapter 13 . 5/18/2014
I love the story please continue it jj and morgan are awesome.
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