Well so far it's a great story.

Awesome! You executed his first time meeting Mary Jane flawlessly.

And just like that a stronger relationship between Peter and his Aunt May is forged.

This chapter makes me sad. Don't get me wrong it's wonderfully written, I can only hope to be as good of a writer as you, it just makes me sad because I feel sorry for Peter. I mean it's just unfair that even with everything he's done for the world, things like Gwen's death still happen to him. It's like a cruel spit in the face from whatever God exists.

Very good, nice writing style, keep up the good work;D
(You' ve set my expectations really high!

You really MUST continue this! Dying to find out what happens next.

Great story. Please update soon I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter

Ohh. I sense a confrontation. Cotinuebsoon.

Pretty good so far I just recommend making the chapters longer

Ooh! Stuff gonna go down soon. Excited.

Awe cute. The runs though? Ew. Continue. I want to see what Harry's up to.

Aww, fluffy. Hoping for longer future chapters.

I'm looking forward to reading more of this story! Keep up the good work.

This is really good! Hope you update soon!

This is off to a nice start. I'm interested to see here it goes. Good luck:)