Oh so sweet and sad also but thanks for a very good read

Cuties. Jane's slow decent into nearly madness got me there for a second. It reminded me of Willy from Death of a Salesman for a second there. That goes to show that I've been reading too much tragedy for school. Nice job on this.

Effective, emotional. The turnabout was cutting, but fair. Glad for the ending. Thanks for writing it.