Hey come on readers! You guys are overjoyed when Elsa is with another guy who's not Jack, and yet you complain about no JackxTooth? I can't be the only one who sees the hypocrisy in this. How about something different? How about Elsa get jealous this time? How about she have to chase after Jack for once in a story?
To Movkingfire, you know what I want. The JackxTooth doesn't even need to be real (or it can be JackxSomeone else); it can be a misunderstanding on Elsa's part. Let's just let Elsa do the chasing for once.

this story is really touching. it made me cry when Elsa sent him away. Please update soon even tho you just like barely updated. I love this fanfic!

Great Writing (like always x) )( I ment to write this review on this chapter oops! xp)

Great Writng (like alwaysx).) I can't wait to read more )

plz make more, this is amazing!

Great fic so far and eagerly looking forward to an update!:)

great chapter:) gives you the warming of your heart and that fuzzy feeling of sentimentalityXD although i have to tale a chance and beg yoy not to put Tooth and Jack together in here... I'm sorry, I respect that it's your story so of course you don't have to listen to me but I don't think anyone is right for Jack but Elsa:)

ugh! the heart-warming cuteness of it alll!:D onto chapter 4!

oh they're so cute! chapter 3!:D

pretty good so far:) i just live Jelsa so flipping muchXD onto chapter 2!

I love this story it's super cute!

more please! :)

I love the story but please don't make it tooth and jack :(

Do update soon though!

This was a good chapter, though short

nice chapter, keep up the good work.