Reviews for Expectancy
nenesse chapter 10 . 7/9/2019
Hi! Your fic is amazing I expect the next chapter! Thanks see you.
MoonlightWolf.SunshineFox chapter 10 . 11/4/2018
holy fucking... idk anymore

btw i hate to admit this but i'm SUCK at biology,happy? i almost don't know a single damn thing during the long ass explanation. but i keep read it anyway...

and that the story almost went to sasuhina,ALMOST,that got me.
i know hinata is gentle and sweet and supportive,and she's the only 1 who stand by sasuke's side when naruto was went nuts. but the thought of him (almost) replacing naruto with her is beyond my acceptance; thank god he didn't. though,i rather to see moose was the 1 who comfort him than hinata; sadly,he's already long gone,how could u do that to him?:(
even the 1st moment of light-weighted-sasuhina,when sasuke crying on her shoulder(and at the same time smelling her scent),that kinda had me snapped a bit. but it's ok as long as they're JUST friends. it won't bother me. but i can't help but keep thinking that sasuke is the luckiest man who ever seen hinata naked,not to mention he's (forced to) touch her (cuz of her wounds) XD oh god that scene almost had me preying that sasuke isn't secretly bi

oh and let's not forget that this story,ur story,is the 1st mpreg that had me scared shitless. this is the 1st time i read a mpreg with there's almost no happiness in it till with what had happen in the end. the fact that naruto is almost 100% hate the baby is so unusual for me. his disgust at the baby is more like that the pregnancy is more like he's been raped by some1... or more like he's been raped by his feelings/emotion itself and unconsciously went auto-pilot

and i thought naruto said kurama is almost like 1 of his family got me confused as hell. if it was not the baby's doing who's doing the foxing and the rapist-mode,then why kurama do that? he should have known wtf is going on out there or get a hold on himself,right?

and that baby,...oh boi THAT baby is definitely not an uchiha or uzumaki or hyuuga or any- freakinthing. he's an ALIEN! a freakin' OTSUTSUKI! he'll beyond overkill and op at the same time when he's grown up! basically he's should only have sharingan and kurama chakra,nothing more. but the fact that he also has rinnegan and byakugan(maybe he got that becuz he raped hinata?) is like u wanna make a normal dinosaurs but combine it with another species' DNA and 'poof'! u got something new!
but don't get me wrong,this is completely still better than boruto and his jougan

and that battle when stunade acknowledge hinata is stronger than her had me cheering like a drunkard; keep shouting at her to beat the shit out of the old hag. although I don't ship sasuhina,i'm still glad that sasuke's (friendly) influence change her

idk what's happening to me tho. lately,i (unconsciously) will always pick a fanfic to read that contains konoha or stunade bashings in it
gindensmi chapter 10 . 5/29/2018
You are amazing!This story was awesome!
BannanGodis chapter 4 . 1/9/2018
First time in fanfic (and anime) I like Hinata :o
yumenohime-sama chapter 10 . 11/20/2017
This story fucked up my sleeping hour but it's so addicting... you really got me there when you made Naruto died.. i was like,"WHAAATTTT?! BUT BUT BUT YOU DIDN'T PUT ANY NOTIFICATION ON DEATH CHARACTER! WHY? WHY?!' and then with Tsunade,, i always believe that she won't try to kill Naruto's offspring.. i hope everything will be alright with her.. D:

good work though... now i'm heading over to Infancy! wohoo~~
emowoods205 chapter 10 . 10/20/2017
Holy shit! Yes thank God he's alive I need to read the sequel!
Guest chapter 10 . 9/14/2017
Ohmygodohmygodohmygod!
This is not happening! I felt like dying reading Naruto dies and now he wakes up? I mean wtf but I'm so happy!
Couldn't have lived without this person being alive in this fanfic. I really thought he'd die and the fic ends haha
introvert136 chapter 1 . 4/25/2017
Once again, a very amazing fic. I love how it not just all sappy and happily ever after, it's a nice change once in a while. Keep up the good work
Crystalzap chapter 10 . 3/27/2017
knew it, Naruto can't die. He's the main character ;P

Anyway I normally don't read 'dark' fics but I had already read the prequel. And I have to say I could have done without the Kyuubi possessed horror but liked everything else. Especially since we now know that the kyuubi isn't actually evil, and has intelligents.
Artymys chapter 7 . 12/10/2016
I know this story is already finished, but a good hiding place could've been Mount Myoboku, or the summoning land of the hawks
peachflavorr chapter 10 . 11/27/2016
I have so many mixed feelings about this story. I just generally don't know how to feel. Sasuke felt manipulative when they found out about the baby, almost like he was pressuring Naruto into keeping (and look what happened lol). And Tsunade was painted to be the antagonist of the story which I also have no idea how to feel about. Personally, I was on her side. Taking the baby away for experiments was not a good idea on the least, but considering terminating the fetus was far beyond Sasuke (who said he didn't even want to rebuild his clan so ?)

I'm surprised it took this long for Narutonto turn actually suicidal. I have no idea how to feel about the baby at all. I kind of expected either Naruto or Tsunade to have a semi-rant (because I mean Naruto's parents died bc of the Kyuubi seal being broken and Madara's help and left Naruto alone for the first 13 yrs of his life. I thought that was going to be discussed because despite Minato's wishes, the village treated Naruto like shit. That wasn't talked about. I'm not disappointed in that, but surprised, or maybe I was longing for it).

Of course I read until the end, and it was a standard ending, one you could pick back up on in the final part of this trilogy. The writing andnplot itself was good, easy to understand, and always had me on my toes to read the next chapter. Manipulative Sasuke is what came off to me personally. It kind of turned me off, but the writing was nevertheless amazing. The next part just might be better. If possible.

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Guest chapter 10 . 10/9/2016
This series has broken me and built me anew, only to break me again in tragic and refreshing ways. I read on with shaking hands, a tremulous heart and a small flaring light of hope.
ItStartsWithZ chapter 10 . 10/3/2016
i’m not into mpreg, but hot damn. you’ve made it work that i almost thought that this is the next part! thank you for this gem, and i apologise if i have reviewed your work a few days after i’ve finished it. you are amazing!
Guest chapter 10 . 9/10/2016
WTF! I am just flabbergasted. Dam crazy and horrific story!
Vivian chapter 7 . 9/6/2016
Wtfffffff. Omgfffggg. It's 2 o clock in the morning and I just pictured the foetus turning and looking at Hinata and that shit right there is effing creepy. Am I reading a horror story? I got goosebumps ok. :(( I don't hate the baby but I'm so scared. All the horror movies I watched are coming back to me with a vengeance.
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