Reviews for Merlin's Struggles
Justsomeone99 chapter 95 . 3/11
Almost three years... I just found this and it was amazing. I don’t know if you would get this but thank you for writing this. I enjoyed every single story, from the main ones to all the bonus chapters. The way you write make my laugh and cry with the stories I felt Arthur and Merlin’s joy and pain. This is a masterpiece, amazing in every single way. The ending was sad but at the same time it felt so right, excelent closure to such a magnificent story.
PurpleFlower07 chapter 1 . 12/27/2018
Oh my god I read the whole thing and even cried! So good! Keep it up my friend.
gaylelbf chapter 1 . 6/15/2018
Interesting
Merlin 2001 chapter 24 . 4/18/2018
Bet he is the court sorcerer's son.
Crystalzap chapter 60 . 2/26/2018
glad I found this here on ff, there is much more than on Ao3. Love the connection between Merlin and Arthur, and the friendship with Gwen, Lancelot, and even Morgana (I really hated her smirk by the end of that show) but you made me like you she could've become.

I thought I'd give a little constructive criticism, if you don't want it then please disregard everything below.
Okay, so while I do think self sacrifice is in both Merlin and Arthur's characters and that they do both love each other I don't think that they would be saying the 'mushy' stuff in this or telling each other everything detail of their lives. (and dreams/nightmares).
It became part of Merlin's character to hide things from childhood, and while he doesn't really have to hide in this fic I don't think he'd find it easy to tell Arthur everything, especially if he thought it would hurt/upset Arthur. As for Arthur himself as you pointed out he was raised to not except or want any help, so while I could see him start to share some more personal things with Merlin I can't imagine him being this different. If you want to change the characters it takes more time and steps inbetween to make it more realistic.
Crystalzap chapter 42 . 2/25/2018
whoa Merlin waited a long time without pushing Arthur, glad they finally agreed to it though Merlin is right a kid with their characteristics would really be something
lkdaswani chapter 95 . 11/12/2017
This story was amazing! Thank you so much for writing it ...3 Also,Congratulations on your marriage !
yukino76 chapter 95 . 10/1/2017
really thier love is like thier vows till death do us apart
zstarlightz chapter 95 . 10/1/2017
Thank you for the dedication, time and effort put into this amazing story! I would love to read an original scifi that you are writing! Could i have the link please️
MirrorFlower and DarkWind chapter 95 . 10/1/2017
Nice ending i liked it. Congrats for you and i hope your book goes well.
Corey YoungBlood chapter 95 . 10/1/2017
I read through both parts thinking 'Hey this is ok, its slow, they're preparing. That means its not sad, I'm amazing at this!"
Right at the end of this part 'Aw crap! I know I wouldn't cope' Tears!
Very nice, still very sad...but nice :) Bravo
Please carry on!
NC chapter 95 . 9/30/2017
Incredible ending. Very heartfelt and beautiful writing.

All the best for your future. Thanks for sharing your talent. it's most appreciated. Don't feel you can't come back for a quick visit to the fandom.
Guest chapter 94 . 9/29/2017
Very good.
Interesting that you chose Lancelot to be his First Knight, rather than Leon. You fit in Lance and Gwen's relationship into the background neatly.
Guest chapter 93 . 9/29/2017
*sniff* still makes me teary-eyed upon reading it a second time. Beautifully done.
yukino76 chapter 94 . 9/29/2017
good
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