I loved the story. I do hope you come back and give them a happy ending your so good at writing.

Hello, I just wanted to say that this was a great story. And maybe as an idea, have the dwarves meet up with Bilbo one at a time or have them go through the quest. Anyway, keep writing.
Rayvin the Fox

Amazing story, horrible ending.
I hope you add to it when you have time. You set it up to be so good, Bella's journey to find Bilbo.
Even if you had ended it with Bilbo sitting down for a fish supper and Dwalin knocking on the door would have been better.

My heart breaks for this conclusion! But fantastic story. Would love to see their reunion! Thorin and Bilbo, that is.

i'm guessing Gandalf found him? How old is he at the end there? So sad. Hope you do come back to it one day. Very well written for something started when you were so young.

well thats another man thats going to die by a pair of dwarves' axes

? I'm afraid I don't quite understand your ending here.

It seems like Bilbo is somehow back in the Shire? How? When did it happen? The last chapter Thorin had just recovered Bilbo after he ran away, and then Bilbo is somehow an older hobbit, washing away memories of Thorin?

I appreciate your efforts to give us an ending, but the ending still has to make some sense. Even just a paragraph in this chapter about how Belladonna's efforts to find her child had finally succeeded would have been something.

I'm a very long time reader of this story, having read it back when there were only a couple of chapters and I was thrilled to see a bunch more finally and completed too! But this is kind of disappointing.

Anyway, it doesn't seem like you really want to continue writing, so thanks for what you did write. I hope you have success in the your real life.

Nooooooooooooooo
Ésto es doloroso.
Pero te agradezco que le dieran un final.

Are you going to keep updating "There Be Demi-gods"?

This was a fine ending!
It made me sad, but I like to think Gandalf comes to get Bilbo for the quest and he's reunited with his dwarves. He might try to resist at first, but falls quickly into past habits, and then they know not all hope is lost.

I love overprotective thorin.

to be continued

This is a very cute story. I really hope that things get better. Please update soon...

continuala

I just read this whole thing while I should be doing homework, but the amount of adorable fluff in this has clogged my ears, wrapped my in warmth, and may choke me (and my grades), but it will still be well worth it. Please update soon!