Wow this is really good- I wish it would update. The only thing I’m weary of is the notebook filled with the future Sasuke made- I’ve seen too many fics were someone decides/reads it. I’m really hoping this fic doesn’t turn out like that.
But yeah this is amazing I hope it updates!

Hello ! I hope you haven't given up since it's been a while since you posted in a row !
anyway I really loved your story!
the friendships and the development of each one is really appreciated, the looks (goodbye horrible orange jumpsuit) and personality although it would have been great if sasuke had long hair !
it is certain that the time has to pass more quickly, but I like that because some author lingers a little too much to tell the academic arc whereas one is eager to follow more or less the canonical history! i like to think that shika observed sasuke during academy days and i love the prospect of a possible relationship between shikamaru and sasuke even though i feel weird that naruto has some attraction towards him too !
I can not wait to know how orochimaru is going to mark him, and his meeting with itachi!
I don't know why but I rather imagine that sasuke would have had an affinity with cats but ironically he is a snake even if it is not a surprise !
in any case I can't wait for the rest! please don't keep us waiting! I wish you good luck !

aww it ended, it was nice! I am not quite Naruto fans but this one is interesting. thanks

This is a good series and your tumblr isn’t around anymore so rip

Plz update this sometime soon I really really love this fic

I hope you update soon, I really love this story!

Thanks for the hard work love the story _
Please don't drop _

It is written very exciting. I look forward to how it goes on.

I love this so much!

I definitely like this. Too bad you stopped when it was just starting to get interesting

so, i love this story. And i also love Shikamaru, and so many people just don't do him just. so, although i have now reread this story three times, and you've not updated in such a long time, i'm going to continue holding onto the hope that you will return. I've posted this review on chapter nine, because i've already review chapter ten before

I've read this a few times now, so good! I hope we get to see more. Thank you for sharing!

Hope you add more one day

I like the nin animals

Really intense chapter