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I would like to see more if Law's crews reactions : 3
How can you make them be so in character? When I write something like this the characters always turn out to be so ooc...
Just plain genius..

*insert Luffy's puppy eyes* More?

Yes I could totally see this happening haha, You made a minor mistake with Luffy's and Law's name and mixed them up when you wrote "Luffy couldn't help but snort" but yeah great chapters :)

Laughing my head off! Can't wait to see what will happen when they meet at Sabaody, also the Marineford War Law won't just let his brother die like that, at least that's the vibe I'm getting. so excited!

I really hope that you pick back up on this fic. because it has so much potential to be something great and entertaining. I do ship the Lawlu pairing but I also love reading fics depicting them as brothers too. So aside from the inevitable reuniting between Luffy and Law in the auction house on Sabody I like how you do the little flashbacks in this chapter. So with that being said I'd LOVE to see how you would go about writing a flashback of Law meeting Garp.

you really should update. this story is awesome and i would love to see more.

Phantom OUT!

Good story so farm, cant wait to see where you take this keep up the good work :)

Haha, I enjoy Law's annoyance towards Luffy's actions. I hope that Law will make more of an impact on the storyline, maybe like storming Impel Down together because they both want to save Ace, or arriving to actually fight at Marineford so Ace wouldn't die...

I eagerly await the next chapter!

Please update soon...We're all waiting for the next chapter!

I really adore stories like this, where Law knew Luffy as kids. I can't wait to see how this continues (which I do hope is soon, cause Law and Luffy are so close to meeting again). That's bound to be interesting. Looking forward to seeing what kind of changes happen throughout.

Update soon please

Really really interesting fanfic you have here! XD Enjoying it so far :3 I can see a lot of potential with this and it's written very nicely xD There's little to no grammatical errors so the quality of this fanfic is really good XD Looking forward to your next update! Please update *puppy eyes*

I love this story! LOL, Ace's greeting to law was hilarious, XD

Law's protectiveness/jealousy are so fun to read, (probably fun for you to write too!)

Update soon,please!I want to see how the strawhats react:D

On that note,can you have Law be captured by the marines?