Fucking awesome

Intriguing piece

Damn, don't make your readers cry like this!
That was stellar. Fluent reading, great plot and the emotions...well, i'm still weeping!

We need more stories like this

And luffy actually looks like their son O.O

Quite good!

...OMG how is it possible for a story like this to be so good. At frist I thought I wouldn't like it, but then I was hooked after the first three paragraphs. Is there going to be another chapter, no it says complete. Darnit, is there any way to convince you to add just one more chapter. Hey when you write something this awsome people usually want more, but your story your rules.

awwnnn! Cute! It is strange, but somehow Luffy being their child really fits, heheh! This story is adorable!

.Atsuko Uehara

I really enjoyed this! I kind of want a chapter where Luffy finds out about his real parents. Maybe from the moment of meeting Mihawk he knew who she was, smarter than others think. Or some coincidence that takes place after the most recent chapters. If you don't write one it's fine, it lets my imagination run wild. Great story and keep up the good work.

PS People need to write more Mihawk fics

There should be a sequel for this ahaha. ANYONE WITH ME!? Anyways, loved it soooooo much! I swear, never read anything quite like this before. And I am not a fan of FemMihawk (you know why *wink wink*), but you just made it work and I enjoyed every second of it and I was just thinking...I wouldn't mind sharing my baee with Shanks.