THIS STORY IS THE BEST THING I'VE READ READ AND I WAS A LITTLE WORRIED ABOUT HOW YOU WOULD GO ABOUT THE WHOLE THING BUT YOU DID A BEAUTIFULLY WONDERFUL JOB. HO MY GOODNESS THIS IS SO GOOD!

Fantastic story. Love Gwaine.
Oh. Please add Merlin's name to your summaries. That is the only way the story shows up on a search of Merlin stories on my smart phone. I found this bcz a friend emailed the link.

I've never given a thought to this pairing before, but this story piqued my curiosity and then I couldn't stop reading it right till the end. Congatulations on your good job and thanks for sharing it!

Congratulations on finishing! That was a wonderful ending, and I liked the little steamy moment you finished on. Kind of sad the story's over, but it was great. Will definitely check out the story you mentioned after a few more hours sleep. - Also really liked how you threw in Gawaine's sense of humour, even in the bed. Good Job!

Huzzah! A wonderful ending to an amazing story. The twists and turns of the plot are sure to keep people reading this story for a long time to come!

Great job. Well done!

*CHEERS* grats on finishing! and what a finish that was! Wonderful steamy ending!

YAY! HE WON! Brilliant twist, you screwed in at the end of quests, did not see that one coming. Very well done! Is there going to be a final couple of chapters about marriage and a wedding or something?

hahaha! That was wonderful! YAH! Gwaine won for Vivian!

um...oops LOL poor Gwaine!
Bet he's going to show them a special kind of 'mercy' when he catches up to them now. Like a merciful death.

Somehow the beggar scenario doesn't seem right for everything else Olaf has done...I'm guessing there is something more behind this, I can't wait to find out!

Lady Heatherly! Long time no word! Fabulous chapter as always, except you've been rude enough to make me ridiculously worried about what's going to happen next. To hell with spoilers. Not yours in particular, just all of them. I was very impresses with the semi-sex scene at the beginning, it was written well. I well get around to reading your other Merlin stories, but as the usual pathetic excuse goes, i have been busy. ANyway, back to the point, this was a great chapter and you should be proud of yourself. Well done!

While I promise to go back and review all chapters at a later time (they deserve their own bravo) I'm rather busy right now so this will have to do. I read the summary for this story and almost cast it aside. I mean, the spoiled, bratty ,popular girl gains the attention and heart of the kind, suave, handsome guy? Nah. Not my style. But then I thought, why the hell not, I have some extra time.

It was the best spontaneous choice I've ever made.

Your characters draw you in whether you want them to or not and against all resisting forced you can't help but cheer for not only Gwaine but for Vivian as well. I think this might be one of the most well thought out, creative, well written, piece of Merlin fanfiction I've read so far. I can't go into extreme detail (I need feeder for the other reviews) but I'd like you to know I how you don't change a damn think about your writing style. Not only is is imaginative, it's inspiring.

Patiently waiting with unruly excitement,
Brooklyn Knight

I was kind of hoping he would get to keep being king as a reward, that would have been cool, but ah well. I love the answer to the riddle, would have been a good look on Gawain's face if he did get a handful of chicken shit! YAY! *throws hands in air* ONLY TWO TO GO!

hehehe she is ornery! Olaf is in for a challenge coming up with the next two. Kind of wondering what the others might be thinking if word got to Camelot about all this.

Can't wait to see what come next and then Gwaine getting his reward. :D

He never really struck me as intelligent, Gawaine. I have no idea how you thought that riddle up but well done! It actually made no sense to me whatsoever, but that will just be me. No good at riddles. Like how you bought out Gawaine's sensitive side and sort of justified part of Olaf's I'm-a-prick behaviour. Yay! 3 more!