Nice

I LOVE YOUR STORY SO SO SO MUUUCh

Just noticed, your chapters are getting really short and the plot is moving too fast. Slow it down and if you can, make your chapters longer.

I love this story! I also thing that the new version is a good idea :)

OH GODS GODS GODS ANNABETH OMG

YEEEEEAH I WANT THE STORY TO BE FINISHED, YAAAAAS
It's so cool, of course, I will continue to read it...
Est-ce clair?
OH, I LOVE MAKING DAM PUNS WITH THE FRENCH WORDS. WHEN YOU'RE FRENCH THAT IS SO COOL TO MAKE FRENCH PUNS IN AN ENGLISH FANFICTION.
-FF
PS: I'm crazy, I know it c;

im not supossed to tell any one but my mom and dad are posidon and rachel yes half blood dont be a hater but my sister inlaw percy and annabeth are real and they are my brother and sister your story is amazimg and i cried when i read it its amazing this is perfect if you want current updates on them messege me on facebook at madelynne gaylord thats my moms last name but your an amazing person

Ied

Hi im reviewing so do somethin cause i loved this fic

This is so amazing can you do a chapter that percy confront the gods about their selfishness and have Annabeth set those ummmmm thos straight as in hurt them

It was so goode it made me cry...

That Angela girl is just horrendous. I wonder if she had anything to do with Anabeth being attacked.

wow okay so Anabeth is way stronger than that to let something like that get to her. Plus those guys would never get the drop on her,. Ugh such disgusting pigs they will definitely feel the wrath of Athena and Zues.

what's the point of trying to get him? If he isn't interested and Annabeth is just so much better than you? Plus they obvs have a special and long girl has problems

That's against the law to give out personal information like that... She physically makes me gag. She's so superficial it hurts