*Sees title* Macbeth?
*Sees a/n* Macbeth
Oof this is so short but sweet my heateuu

I could tell from just the summary that you had a beautiful writing style and your story proved me right. I feel like you really captured who Yato is, amazing job! :)

This was unexpectedly dark and beautiful at the same time. It's a perfect portrayal of Yato and Hiyori (though I must say, those last lines broke my heart). I caught up to the manga about four weeks ago, and I am AMAZED. It's got way more detail and depth than the anime (but Kamiya Hiroshi has an attractive voice, so I love the anime as well)

Wow, this is amazing! Thanks!

Stunning. I loved every single word of this. I am amazed at how well you managed to write his wanting to not stain them while wanting to stay with them at the same time also how he does not deserve the both of them. Honestly, this is beautiful. Looking forward to more!

I was absolutely blown away by your writing. I loved how you balanced Yato's pessimistic thoughts about his past, and his hopeful optimism about the future with Hiyori and Yukine.

Can't wait for more :)

Love this story so much , it's very thoughtful and deep .
Keep it up!

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I love your Nagi no Asukara stories so I'm actually really happy that you wrote a Noragami fic! Yay for growing small fandoms, amiright?
Anyways, very poignant, and I love the imagery. Keep up the good work!