Omg, XD when you said Siri's monsters were based off Pokemon monsters I laughed cause I imagined Mini Ocean Dragon looking something like Dratini! X3

So I got really disapointed when you inturduced the two dragons as Pokémon rip offs. There are a lot of spelling errors. And sentences aren't clear and flowing. But other than that, I really like the story and the chacters. I wish you would give chacters more "screen time" and do more with TJ. He just seems to be on the sidelines. He just seems to randomly apear and disapear. With a cast this large, some, and most chacters feel underused and worthless. Yuma seems to be unimportant, Mizar. Is just there, Dumon, Girag and the rest of the emporers just feel non-excinstent. I realy only notice Sri and Vector. And even they feel like the spotlight isn't on them. I'm sorry I'm ranting. But, this is important. Thank you for writing this.

It' s yaoi? Please nooo

Kite Be Like I Was Wondering When You "Gays" are coming

it would be funny if the enemies go after Astral. I mean Astral was the first one to defeat Don Thousand right.

Thank you for the update; hope to read the next chapters soon

I hope to read more chapters about Yuma

Good chapter

Finally another chapter! Good job on the chapter!

cliffhanger! Very intriguing chapter, loved it, hope you update soon!

That was awesome! :)

Good chapter, hope you update soon!

thank you for the update; I hope to read the next chapters soon

Great chapter! Just wondering how soon the next chapter will come out!

When are you making another chapter?

I like Mizar.