we want more please author

we want more right now please author pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Come back please! I need this story!

Please update you are doing awesome fan fiction here

pls more update

I liked the whole chapter. Just the fact, where Ash thinks that he might get someone as a Love Partner. Its better to let Ash not fantasize about Love. He is a dense boy and doesn't think much about it, yet. So.

fv

cool

I'm actually sad this has been discontinued, I enjoyed it very much and just discovered this fanfic

Good story so far, i hope you find some time to update it soon.

This was a fantastic read well done

Please can you update the story very early as possible?

You mean there won't be anything. There has been 3 years without an update after all. Btw, a criticism for the story if your still checking reviews and such and want to improve as a writer, stop using flash backs so much and so haphazardly. It makes things very confusing/ difficult to keep up with. It ended up with me skipping most of the story.

Bertha? Isn't she Agatha because I remember seeing Agatha in starting of battle frontier way long ago.

This story is amazing! Please continue it and don’t abandon it! It’s been 3 years I need my fix!