Your stories are very heart warming. Cant get enough of em

Great fic! You did a good job of characterizing everyone and making them feel like real people. You also did a great job of showing how much they care for each other, especially since most fics tend to show Hinata caring for naruto more than the other way around. You also did a great job of bringing in Jiraiya, because in a lot of fics kids tend to be... kind of annoying if I’m honest. You’re a great writer and I hope you keep it up!

Hinata jumping to sacrifice herself and Neji to protect Naruto echoes how the series started with Iruka sacrificing himself to save Naruto. Them going against someone supposedly stronger than them to protect the sunshine boy and Naruto leveling up his power as a result of their sacrifice.

I always wondered what exactly Naruto went chasing Sasuke for in the first place. Sasuke had no life or bonds in the village.

Also I had a bit of trouble fitting Hinata into the lines during the Sasuke interaction. Her hating anyone. I mean she didn't hate her father after all. And Naruto chose to pursue Sasuke so that's on him it's not to say Sasuke hunted him down and made his suffer so I just couldn't really understand that reasoning.

Holy cow, what trash. NH is itter cral. Like Sasuke would be bothered by those two losers. Btw, you should change your name to flipflops because that is what you are..

One of my favorite writings! Amazing depictions with enough cuteness, seriousness and steamy ness. Amazing writing!

Lonely fic snippets mate. I really felt the relationship between Naruto and Hinata. Felt earned, there was built up, it was gradual but natural. You could that they are really in a relationship going through the ups and downs, the pleasant firsts and the unpleasant firsts. *plus ultra thumbs up*

You are such a pathetic flipflop. Hope you're dead.

NH LITERALLY had ZERO development in the manga. What drugs are you on?

I honestly LOVE the way you write naruHina and Sasuke and their interactions.
I relate so heavily in that I really don't like Sasuke at all... closer to despise. he is really a terrible person ugh. But I see that he is needed too. Naruto wouldn't be the same without him.
Anyway, I have absolutely loved chapters 1-3. Can't wait to read the rest!

SasuSaku was confirmed mutiple times in the manga. And the only one confirmed before chapter 700 so you are wrong.

Uhmmm... I like your story a lot and I agree that dick-measurements between ships are stupid and pointless, especially talking about Fanfictions. But what do you mean that sasusaku love is not reciprocated in canon? What about the forehead poke? That was HUGE. what about Sasuke telling Sarada that his and Sakura's feelings are connected?
Anyway as I was saying I like your story, my favourite chapter has to be the third one, but they are all good. Just no need to throw another ship under the bus

Cap 12 . Mi favorito,sin duda, fue Rib

Cap 5. no jodaaaas! Kurama es realmente tan tieeerno! _

Cap 2. Bueno...sasuke ya no es taaaaan idiota

Cap 1. sasuke es un idiota -_-