This is so go. Utter perfection. Hook is on point here. Would be nice to see a retrospective of this from Storybrooke.

This was PERFECT! Honestly, so well done. I read it twice in one go!

I loved this! It was so fun and spicy, but had real, deep emotions beneath that surface. It was very cool how you used the lines they spoke to each other in the finale, but then enhanced that with the thoughts they could each well have been having while the conversation was going on. I also liked how you ended it, with past Hook confused and longing, but us knowing where he will run into that blonde again. :) Nice job with this!

I really wished he did remember!

This is a lovely interpretation of that night. You got Hook, or how I at least imagine his thought process to be during this scene and afterwards, down to a science. I love it!

That is an excellent one shot. I like the tie in you had in the last line too "Because even though what's left of his heart hurts, at least he knows it still works." That was great!

I love this! U captures his pov perfectly!

Do when Hook first meets Emma after this!

You should write a 2nd pary when hw first meets Emma and the beanstalk

Love this! I love reading fics where he longed for her and woke up to look for her! It especially makes sense to me considering how stunned he looks when he sees her for the first time.

great! except I would love it if someone would take this and run with it - basically, rewrite the show somehow (I can't figure out exactly how it would work yet) so that hook does remember and goes after her ... maybe this past!hook finds a spell or something to find her and oh! maybe he ends up in Boston and meets her before she comes to storybrooke. or he ... I'm not sure...

That's cute. I personally think you've poured a little too much of present Killian into past hook to be in character.

I mean, I know why ... it's fricken adorable...but I do find it highly unlikely that Hook planned on committing to Emma and dragging her off to sea the moment he laid eyes on her. :P ( i.e.: I think there was a legitimate reason Killian was nervous to leave Emma with Hook. ) And as much as I wish she looked at Killian as 'the man she loves' we got a good look at her face and it was much more along the lines, of 'what the hell' than 'my love'

Still it was really adorable. OOC is sometimes a lot of fun!

Even though clearly Hook drank plenty before Emma came around... I still loved the detail of him getting the flask that day.

Love it! Captain Swan 3

Loved it. I love that kiss so much and everything about Emma and past Hook...The Rolly Joger thing is soooo funny!