I know it’s been about 4 years since you updated (jesus), but I really hope you think about picking this story up again. It’s well thought out, and I really wanna see the results of the tournament and get to see who battles Pegasus, Yugi or Yu? Because only one can battle him at a time (or can they).

I'm only just now reading this and haven't seen the other chapters, but I REALLY hope that Pegasus will be like "wtf is a Persona I never made those cards? something fishy is going on"

Hello my friend, it has certainly been a long time since we last spoke. I finally decided to take a peek at your story, which I must admit is very well thought out. While I am unfamiliar with the Persona franchise, the characters you've introduced feel as though they are loyal to the franchise they came from. Excellent job there, and the Yugioh characters I AM familiar with feel in character, so kudos for that accomplishment.

Writing and diction are top notch, and I do see exactly what you'd meant when you'd requested for more details in my writing when you reviewed my story. The use of the Japanese honorifics such as Sempai, Chan, and San are not necessarily something I would have done, but that's a really minor nitpick in the grand scheme of things. I suppose I could just blame my American upbringing for that, lol.

Long story short, I can't find any flaws in this well thought out and carefully constructed story of yours, I hope that you will keep up the good work my friend! I hope to hear from you again soon, be it here or on Chaos Unleashed. Until next time!

From your Nutty Buddy,
The Eagle Nut

How about a cardfight vanguard and persona 4 x over with a similar plot but have the investigation team have their own decks because in vanguard tournaments its with teams and can you start with season 1

Ok I just read your card and I have to ask, do you even know how over powered Magatsu Izanagi is? I mean, all you have to do is normal summon him and sacrifice one card and BOOM you could destroy someone's entire strategy. You could do this at any point too, all you need is it and one other card.

From your deck creation, i can safely conclude, you won't ever get a job as a card designer

Sorry I meant duel in my previous comment. Can't believe I made that mistake.

Nice story man. Sorry about what happening in your life, hope things work out. Can't wait to see Yu meet and deal Kaiba eventually, that should cut that jerk and his ego down to size. Btw, any chance you could also do a story with Yu and the Persona Users in GX, 5DS, and Zexal? Also is Minato going to appear eventually and even come back?

Yay! New chapter! So... plot thickens? The Yu Gi Oh gang are American? Or at least not Japanese. I'd like to see who Yu and Nanako duel. Yu knows the value of a life better than Joey. I'm guessing Bakura stole Marie's powers? Yu can sense Millennium Items, and the others can sense Personas?
I wish you the best with your life.

Glad to hear things are getting better with your dad and that your brother's surgery went well.

As for the chapter, it was another great one. Yu and Nanako's interactions with the other duelists was well done, and Yu's suspicions about Yugi's Puzzle are definitely going to be justified soon. Keep up the great work, looking forward to the update.

Update soon pls

Wow, this idea has so much potential. The combining of the Persona verse and the Yugioh verse can actually work pretty well if you know how to do it. Will Yugi and friends get Personas of their own? Is the Pharaoh of this timeline a previous Wild Card? The possibilities are endless.

Great story. I'm really enjoying it so far. Hope to see another update soon. I look forward to seeing what happens when Yu and Yugi meet each other. Also, a question. How are life threatening situations going to be handled in this story? Is Arkana going to use buzz saws or Dark Energy Disks during battle city?

How does this even work? You can't just give people random decks and expect them to be legal. Pegasus creates all the cards and you just introduce a bunch of new ones, people gonna notice he's using fake custom cards that's not officially registered

Wow! Didn't Pegasus to meet Yu and then win a duel against him and taking away Dojima's soul! Damn, hope Yu wins and then take back his uncle's soul!