I usually hate Lightning. I still do. But. This story was hot enough for me to forget that I do. Nice job.

Amazing!

You're very good at writing these! I love that Jo is getting more focus, as she doesn't usually get much attention from the writers on this site. Gosh, would it be out of line if I were to ask if you'd be willing to write a Jo/Brick/Lightning threesome?

Good fanfic, even though I hate joing and am a MAJOR jock fan. You could see how much of a jock fan I am in your jock smut shot reviews. Not my couple, but good story dude. Keep going on the fanfics for my tiny perverted mind.