This is beautiful, trully.
I would be sold already at Zenkichi's multiverse speech.
but nabeshima's characterization this alternate ( improved/more interesting ) Zenkichi the subtle world building ( which you masterfully did with a few lines from their conversations. Less is truly more in stories like this) Ajimu 3
This is alredy in my top 3 medaka box fics. only behind " the perfect minus and the ultimate despair" and " World as a Myth"

I like the way you handle mystery. Shiranui s and Zen s conversation and Medaka's recollection of Zen 's " secret journey" really sparks my curiosity, and I am kind of a Outer-gods fanboy so the prospect

Anyway, thank for your contribution for this small fandom.

This is too intense for me to truly read. Intense isn't the right emotion, but I honestly feel pain when it comes to Medaka so I'm outta here.

huh.

I think I preferred the original to the rewrite.

honestly I'm disappointed in the whole thing both the original and the rewrite just super disappointing I mean you set up something big and then all of sudden you give us nothing

Such a superbly wrote story. A pity it seems abandoned.

A shame this hasn't been updated in a while...

I am wondering when you will update again since it has been more than a year from your last update.

I honestly don't blame Momo for wanting to kill them all. Good god people are annoying. I can see why earlier Zenkichi mentioned how he doesn't feel like turning earth into a piece of space rock yet. But that its something to take note of for he future. Rofl.

I love how they keep referring to this being a story thats being read and even the contrivances and author references. Love it. I'm guessing the only thing that would keep her hunger even mildly at bay is human sacrifices and devouring other eldritch abominations. Pretty damn awesome.

To think something occurred which caused all this, which caused Hansode Shiranui and Zenkichi Hiteyoshi to change and become different beings completely. I've seen a story or two that have Hanhaba be in Hansode's place at the academy. Kinda interesting to be fair.

lewl. The more human Medaka is much stronger in the puppy eyes and pouty face. The power to manipulate Zenkichi even more so than before. I liked the paintings. I enjoyed the pulling out of their true states and potential via art. Very cool. I could imagine Zenkichi's being something so abominable and so holy that it creates pure destruction just from the effect of the dichtonomy created with the two conflicting extreme states. I always forget the names of horrors described. I should reread Lovecrafts books.

Oho how curious. I'm loving the Cthulu mythos additions here. Its very interesting.

Hm. So they became Eldritch horrors. Beings so far beyond even the concept of the perfect human and even the Not Equals that its just silly to compare. Fascinating.

I liked this closure for Akune. Its no fun being left hanging and the more human medaka recognizes this.I"m glad.