Cool concept
Keep up the good work

i hope naruto is just pretending to buy time, and what is it that he can't hate hiruzen, who is practically to blame for almost everything that went wrong in his life what is this Stockholm syndrome? and how with all this time he had he didn’t start working to get rid of the seal that held him, one that was probably invented by the uzumaki clan, and naruto didn’t even speak to the kyuubi in his mental landscape, he could threaten to release the kyuubi in konoha since there is no other uzumaki to be Jinchuuriki, bluff a little to have more control over the situation but he just accepts everything they send, where's that independent and strong and brave naruto that resists the adversities, even though the potion seems like the one I was reading up to 20 chapters ago, now all I see is a trained pet that obeys everything his captors tell him to do without showing resistance or fighting his bonds, this chapter broke my spirits for the next chapters of this story,

I'm trying to figure how this is going to go. Naruto has the memories of a Uzumaki seal master why wouldn't he just after they unlock his chakra just finished undo the rest of his seal and just his chakra back and leave idk depending on how the next few chapters go I might just stop reading this

Feels like you're binding Naruto so that you can keep the canon events during the Chunin Exams happening. Naruto stands no chance at all vs Orochimaru or Gaara with 95% of his chakra sealed off. Meaning the Sandaime is going to die during the Invasion which will probably lead to Naruto feeling guilty and deciding to stay and form 'bonds'.

Meanwhile the people around him are going to be acting like he's NOT a prisoner and that he should make friends with the people around him!

I'm trying to not jump to conclusions about the direction of your story, but this chapter really dampened my enthusiam about your fic. I mean i started reading this fiction to see an independent naruto, free from konoha, doing his own thing not a naruto forgiving his past tormentor and becoming a willing slave to the leaf...

On other hand, his willingness to work with konoha could be a side effect of absorbing danzo memories, the biggest konoha supporter (Naruto called Sarutobi his oldest friend and supporter in his mind an odd thing to think for naruto about the 3rd hokage).

So i'm a little on the fence for now, i don't like where the plot seems take us but we have to little info to start disliking your story.

I hope my review don't came as flame or too strong in the criticism, this is not my aim it is just my honest opinion, despite all i'm impatiently awaitong the next chapter!

why the fuck is naruto agreeing with everyone
I loved this story for naruto leaving konoha
but now bamm he is back... what nextI WILL BE THE NEXT HOKAGE"
or wrost "I WILL SAVE EVERYONE. MY PRECIOUS PEOPLE OF KONOHA. AND I WILL GLADLY FIGHT FOR KONOHA IN THE EXAM . THE SAME VILLAGE THAT HATES MY WHOLE EXISTENCE."

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Wow great chapter!

Awesome story. I really can't wait for the next chapter. The characters and storyline are just amazing and well made, and the story manages to have many parts without it not making sense. Well done.

me gusto pero deben dejar a naruto solo y que el este en lo examenes de chunin es una exaGERACION naruto es mas fuerte que todos ellos espero el proximo capiulo sube el capitulo 22,23,24 de esta historia

Yeah I’ve followed this story for a while and always hoped you would never go down the route of Naruto returning and being forced to stay. It just seems so out of character for the Naruto that you have been developing to stat forming bounds with a village he has come to hate, I feel that the last straw for me is if he becomes a ninja of Konoha.

what is the point of the previous chapters if you just make naruto a konoha ninja again? man, when i thought i found an original fic

what is the point of making an overpowered mc then nerfing him like this? and now naruto is back to konoha again, and let me guess, he wants to be an hokage ?

I need another chapter, now!

I hope this entire fanfiction isn't going to just be 'everyone craps on Naruto' on repeat? I mean something good has to happen to him eventually right?