Good story

Great story, just like your other ones that i'm binge reading right now. Love the ones I read so far..

All your notes about the plot holes in twilight make sense to me. The biggest one to me is... tribal secret or not, how could Billy let his best friend's daughter marry a vampire without telling Charlie.? Surely the danger to Bella outweighs the need for secrecy?

Spectacular

excelent as always, you are amazing !

wonderful story!

awww happily ever afters always tug at my heartstrings c:

lol I thought when Jake was about to say 'bloodsucker' he was going to say 'blowhard' xD

Awesome job here hon! I loved this fic! ;o)

:sigh: I really really like this one :D

Just read this story in one sitting. What a lovely couple You created. This Jacob is someone who can accept Bella for who she is. And knows the person she is inside.

Happily ever after makes me happy too.

Please dont shut up! You make several good points while also showing the glaring inconsistencies of S. Meyer's writing. She did attempt to explain that Edward miraculously lost his taste for Bella's blood upon seeing her injured, but that came across as an afterthought kind of reason.

Bella's explanation is quite plausible. Always seemed that she wanted Edward more for what he could give her. Bella saw being changed as a way to escape the turmoil and complicaition of life.

I would usually expect Bella to just gloss over some of the horrible things she has done to Jake in the name of "not being good enough" and make it all about her. Her problems, her feelings, just - her. However your writing has managed to keep things fresh so far with a fairly unique take on twific.
Be nice if Bella at least tried to understand that Jake loved her so much that he didnt want her to be with him out of obligation. He wanted her to have a choice even if that choice wasn't him.

Sorry it's IAJSexy&Beautiful