| Reviews for Hesitations: Donnie & April |
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   Nichalia chapter 22 . 6/17/2018 woah |
| lizzybudd chapter 22 . 2/2/2018 Loved it! Thanks for writing (awesome quote - a writer without a reader is nothing) |
| RelaxedReady chapter 22 . 1/19/2018 Well hello there! :D The POV change was surprising and i LOVED how you explained it at chap's end, great job! 'Off the chain' is a delightful turn of phrase and i could imagine exactly what Don's new arm looked like, really cool. i hope it has a vibration feature :D I also enjoyed wikidpedia'ing Mandelbrot Set! I do ache for more Apriltello and i hope we may see how lil miss love-lost is doing, after Leo got her to "help" him, lol. Thank you for updating and continuing this story, i love it and I hope you get to write more. Thanks JJ! |
| FeatherArtist chapter 22 . 1/19/2018 Hoo-boy and Oodelally! This is going to get complicated, isn't it?! Comatose for months and he can't...remember certain people?! What are you doing to me?! Oy! Can't wait to see what's in store ;) Thanks for the update! |
| Beez' Nezt chapter 22 . 1/19/2018 YOU'RE BACK! Yes yes yes! Oh, HAPPY DAY! Welcome back, Jay. |
| SlenderGrl chapter 21 . 9/23/2017 Oh man. I really hope you come back to this! This is really good and I'm dying to know what happens! |
| RelaxedReady chapter 21 . 3/10/2017 the 'sight...hammered...steel' wow amazing characterization, spot on. I loved the break '-' in concentration, at the appearance of Karai, nice job. that kiss, go ninja go. great action. Solid chap, thank you so much for sharing! |
| RelaxedReady chapter 20 . 3/3/2017 Thanks for the update I am behind! Tongue blood and super juice - yes. Oh snap! Fishface's cloaca getting frisky...but wait! Dayyymmm! Fishface got fucked up! Great chap thanks JJ |
| BubblyShell22 chapter 21 . 3/2/2017 Awesome chapter and I loved how Leo deceived Karai like that. He means business now, and the Foot better watch themselves. Nicely done on this. I'll be eagerly awaiting an update. The Bubbly One, Shell |
| Beez' Nezt chapter 21 . 3/2/2017 Hunh...knowing Karai, she'll probably wake up sporting one of those afore-mentioned grins. Seriously, seriously messed up. More, please...? |
| SewerSurfin chapter 20 . 2/13/2017 HAHAHA Fishface! Hopefully things are on the up now! |
| SewerSurfin chapter 19 . 2/13/2017 I remember the stuffed frog :D What's April planning?! |
| SewerSurfin chapter 18 . 2/13/2017 You have Mikey down to a science. Do you have a degree in Mikey? |
| SewerSurfin chapter 17 . 2/13/2017 The hilarity of the trenchcoats was broken! POOR DONNIE!AHHHHHHHHHH! |
| SewerSurfin chapter 16 . 2/13/2017 You are correct...the great thing about fan fiction is that we all can have freedom of expression. I think the love triangle thing is taken too far...even if Casey is amusing. His arrogance makes me laugh. Anyhoo...this chapter is great as well. Awkward Raph trying to comfort people is hilarious...and that last line...sooo funny! |
