IT'S ALIVE thank you for continuing this story at last

So I've read through the story and I have a few notes for you. The first is that Hiccup wouldn't remember Malie at all if she disappeared 15 years ago and he is 15, he would have been an infant. Memory can have great long term memories. I lost my mother when I was two, seventeen years ago and I have no memory of her. The first memories that people can recall are around age three or four, the brain isn't developed enough to remember things long term until that point in development. Secondly there are quite a few hints that Gobber is homsexual, if you are paying attention to the movies and the TV series. Lastly if it had been 15 years ago there was no way that Malie would have lived if she was under the age five or four, she wouldn't have the motor skills the survive on her own. Another fair warning don't get into the habit of making things happen to characters you don't like or 'giving them what they deserve' because it leads to a load of problems. But its an interesting story guide and I'll continue to watch this story. Make sure to do the Universal Mary Sue test on Malie. I saw you're new to writing on here so make sure to know what a Mary Sue is and how to avoid it.

wow will the legend happen?

Will hiccup fall for her and what will astrid do?

great update

PLEASE update this! XD so far I love it!... Pretty please?

I think this is really good. I hope the next chapter is up soon. :)

please update soooooooooooooooonn!

i admire hiccup for his non enviousm. i probably couldnt pull that off.

Hi! This story is excellent! I love the sweet relationship between Malie and her dragons, its adorable! and Gobbers seems like he is over the moon.. and hiccup?
Well.. I SENSE ROMANCE! Haha Pls update soon 3

Yay there back

please write more soon.

Love this

Update soon :) :)

please write more soon.

love this story looking forward to the next part, keep up the great work :)