That was so adorable haha

Ash is very romantic and very generous to May hope they get married plus Ash is a badass to protect May from the people's

I have to say that this story is one of my favorite of Ash and May I really hope that you finish this awesome story

I reread this again: same reaction as the previous time: a lot of squealing with the kawaiiness. Fanfictions like these are what keep me an Advanceshipper: imo, only God could have inspired people to be able to write such works, and He would only bless the shipping that He chooses to happen. (Sorry if you don't believe in God). Once again, Thank you so much for writing this amazing story.

I love the story! So Much!

Wow. Just wow. Quite in character, perfect plot, great writing: overall, a marvelous piece of work. More people need to write like this. This also would have been a really great storyline for XY (and that means a lot considering Serena is so kawaii). Please continue to write these stories. Best of luck, have fun, and be proud of your (pretty much) perfect story.

Well, I thought that they got a little too heated too fast, but on the whole this is a satisfactory ending. Well done! This is a wonderful story!

PLOT TWIST. Didn't see that coming!

Uh-oh...that doesn't look good.

Love that Smoke Ball trick Ash pulled. He really has grown up!

You captured May's growing affection for Ash over the course of their adventure better than I did in one of my fics! Great job!

Wait, it's over?! Haha...didn't see that cliffhanger coming.

Looks like the tension is finally building. This should be interesting.

Well I was kinda hoping that May would lean on Ash as they sat watching the stars, but this story is so adorable, I can't complain! Man, he's going all out for her! I wonder how things are gonna shape up in the next chapter...

Oh, Ash...dense as ever...even when he's really feeling it! I'm loving this story.

That opening to the chapter was freaking adorable. I love it!

Yugi Muto...lol! That made me smile.

Nice beginning you got there! I look forward to reading the rest.

This is one of the best average sized fanfic I've ever read. To be honest. Your writing style is like no other.