Everything but the ending was perfect.

Terrific story! I love the writing style. I'll never have the guts to try second-person, but you made it work very well. I felt as if I was put in the shoes of both Natasha and Maria as a result; it was very immersing. I don't ship them, but the story is good and I can see it. Sort of makes me wonder why I didn't see it before.

That last one is sad. But it's fitting. Hopefully they'll reunite in the future. Well done.

I may be not a fan of the use of 2nd person but this story is beyond cuteness. Natasha/Maria is the only slash I read! You're doing great :)