Dear Books:

Just thought I should mention: It should be "buffet style". Serving dinner Buffett style would involve lettuce and tomato, Heinz 57 and French-fried potatoes, big kosher pickle and a cold draft beer. (Good God Almighty, which way do I steer?)

Sincerely,
Bar Sira

PERFECTION!

okay, i’ve been putting off commenting bc i honestly didn’t know how to express how much i loved this fic. i had started reading it sometime last year but i then i got a reading block and stopped. i am so glad that i decided to continue reading it during quarantine. i stayed up to 6 am reading this bc i just couldn’t put it down and was just so captivated by the story. i loved seeing the relationship between harry and sherlock progress. i loved seeing the care and love between john and harry. i loved the dynamics between john and sherlock and seeing how much they care for each other and respect the other, while also pushing the other to be better. i loved the entire shin family; each individual character and the family as a whole. and as someone who maybe, might be, polyam, i was so happy so see neville, harry, and julia together at the end. i just- this was an amazing read, and it’s an amazing fic, and i’m so so happy i got a chance to read it 333

I feel like I’ve been pranked. Now I understand why I’ve seen ASIM, but not ASIM:TA on Favorite lists.

I didn't comment on this for the previous story, but I really like the Tales of Adrianna idea. It also makes me wonder if the author is the same as the Boy Who Lived adventure books that Harry's contemporaries grew up on?

: )
Yay polyamorus relationships

Oh god, I just love this universe!

I loved this story. Thank you so much. I only wished to have read about Harry's first year of freedom. Still, thank you for a marvelous story.

I love this story as well as the first one. I bought the on the basis of the first few chapters of ASIM. I really hope the book sell well. I will be dropping into BOC dot com on a regular basis.

Thanks for the efforts you put into these works.

HA!
Nicely wrapped up, even if the threesome felt a little out of place.
Like, that totally blindsided me. Neville comes in here storming out of left field and whacked me on the head on his way to Harry's side.
I was seriously thinking it would be Harry and Julia. Then again, I am notoriously oblivious to body language and social cues...so...you might have made it super obvious and I just didn't notice at all.

Another one!? Oooo...John might just beat Sherlock black and blue...
Good story. The ending felt slightly rushed, but that is probably because I wanted it to keep going.
I don't see any loose threads, only one messy knot (depending on whether I missed stuff or not) and an overall enjoyable story. Minimal typos. Like...less than 50 for this and the previous story. But I wasn't really looking for them. Too busy enjoying the story.

hee hee hee! Yep. Ruining lives indeed. Nevermind the psychological trauma of all the teenagers who can't text their friends or post to FaceBook.

But yeah, if that ever happened, the finances of everyone would be totally screwed.
I swear, if Sherlock did this using a body duplicate somehow, JUST to get John to go all Army on the Death Eaters and LV, I don't know if she'll forgive him.

No...NO! You...you...YOU MONSTER!
This had better be another fake death! You horrible monster!
As if the first time wasn't bad enough! ...oh wait. Wasn't the whole point of this to scope out a location AND send false visions? Hm...

You're really good. Seriously. I need more. Reading more now.

Mr. Shin... crochets!?
wha..buh..duh..HUH!?
I don't even... but it got a giggle out of me, picturing that scene.
I also keep forgetting that Harry has white hair now. Really throws me off.
But, white haired Harry, battle scarred Neville, and the crazy cast of support characters make this story a lot more vibrant than the original. I keep thinking back to the original and I remember there were very few supporting characters and most of them were flat. All of your support characters have depth to them. Except Crabbe and Goyle, because they are too stupid to have any.
;P

Wow...heavy on the emotions in this chapter. Really well done.
Just one thing though: 'peaking over' is not correct. It should be 'peeking over'.

Absolutely fabulous.
A show of unity and willingness to stick to science and logic, even when dealing with magic.
But seriously...Wizards need to learn science and modern medical practices.
Just think of all the things they could accomplish if they just caught up with us Muggles!