Hope to read more if you will continue the story

Great work, the battle was amazing since we got to see some of what Betsy is really capable of even if she is out of practice and Harry and her have finally laid they secrets out to each other for the mist part. And u can not wait fro Harry to deal with those arrogant pieces of garbage that have the nerve to screw with his newest partner/Pokegirl to try and get to him. I look forward to seeing him get her sister back back fro that place.

I really hope you plan to continue thus story.

Another wonderful chapter and I'm glad that Harry is starting to understand how this new world works and more importantly he is starting to let someone in again.

Great chapter and some nice information.

Meh, too steeped in world building. Barely interesting.

You still alive I ask because it's been 4 years since you last updated

*Poke.*

*Poke again.*

*Poke a third time.*

Oi, are you alive there? Still breathing? Not moldy or rutting hopefully? If you are in fact still alive do you think there will ever be a update to this? I ask because it has been quite a few years but this has so much potential...

I am really enjoying this story and hope to see more chapters posted for it. Keep up the good work.

Well that was interesting I still want to know how they found him under the antarctic ice but it's good that he isn't going to Azeroth yet after all its filled with beings who could wipe out an entire city literally in the blink of an eye.

Your story starts nice and is good written, I only hope it doesn't end here already.
I hope there will be another chapter someday, and the story will be developed further.
Marczeg Szar

Well, I just favorited this fic. This has been a rather well done pokegirl fic to start off with. I'm enjoying that most of the sex is sort of behind the scenes. Some pokegirl fics focus far too much on the sex. The setting is one of the darker ones around though.

I think that I like how you've basically nerfed the pokegirls. Instead of the girls being perfect copies or having a bit better then the originals, the pokegirls are mainly looking like the originals and as best he could do to mimic them.

Most poke girl fics that I've read unless you are end game Naruto, HP, or Ranma you wouldn't really have a shot at winning against basic pokegirl. I'm thankful that you had him able to best one of the worst native threats. Arguably one of the worst local threats. It set the bare for his power level and also shown it is possible for humans to trump them. Than again this is an end game amped up HP so...

I don't really mind the secret group of thugs and all that after him for various reasons. That's sort of just a thing with the setting. My only real complaint is you barely were really letting him get day one into things before tossing in a so called spy and all that.

I'll agree that they'd want to monitor him, recruit him, or get as much sperm samples from him as possible, but they shouldn't have success at actually planting an agent in his harem right off.

At a minimum, he should make DD swear an unbreakable vow to never communicate his or his harem's secrets or to betray them on her life and magic. O.k. I don't really see that happening as she looks abused/mind fucked and all that. The only reason that he'd insist on her doing some thing like that is if you were using one of those the magical vow helps the person keep the secret unless they willing are giving it up and forfeiting the price.

So far, I'm rather mixed on DD. I was set to be o.k. with her during the fight, but after you made her an utter wreak? Nope. I'm just not interested in him repairing/fixing/bonding with her.

Like I said, you planted her in there fair to early, and I'm just not liking her much. Betsy, yes. New girl? so far nope. The first couple of pokegirls are the ones he is supposed to be able to utterly trust and bond with and all that.

I'm looking forward to him picking up a witch and than for them to just teleport some where and train. I'd like him to try fixing DD or giving her a pepper up potion or something. Don't pull out some mega super power up just to refill her reserves or such.

On genders of the deities or what not. I'd consider them gender neutral, but if they want/need to be female than hey so be it. I actually think that they don't have a gender, but since Harry is heterosexual male then they chose to be bi females for future fun.

The 3 that I'd suggest him picking up, a healer nurse joy type, a catgirl so she could become a cabbit than starlightexpress, than the PSI A-bra - Ka-D-Bra - Alaka-Wham.

You seem to be picking up a witch - Enchantress - Archmage next.

I was skimming through the reviews. Some one mentioned having his favor being having Hermione show up. No. Nope that is a horrible idea at the moment.

Why? He is just really starting to recover from her loss. Betsy is helping him there. Adding her back into the mix at present would ruin his present progress.

If you ever plan on him finding his Hermione reborn, it should be at least the 3 world after this one. I'm also assuming a minimum of a year spent on each world before jumping as well.

Say, if you had them take 5-10 years each, that would be a good amount of time growing and bonding with his harem.

One fun thing that you might do is have him find a limited cure for the sex factor of the pokegirl thing. From his point of view, pokegirls aren't super powered animals that some times can show some human intellegence. From his POV, the pokegirls are merely the offspring of cursed women and at worst various magical creatures that some times fall into the creature rather than being classification.

It'll take Harry awhile to really come to grips with the entire pokegirl thing.

I'm actually curious on why Death would have had anything against The Widow other than being something for Harry to show off against. I'd figure that she'd be just as upset about the various pokegirls like Betsy that are basically ageless. The Widows are basically wild animals at best.

One of the better pokegirl fics that I read mentioned something about pokegirls being built different than humans and being happiest fighting and fucking. Many humans just don't get that. It's sort of like how house elves / brownies are just different / alien in respect to humans and think radically differently than we do. You've not really gotten very far into the fic yet, but that's sort of background theme in many pokegirl fics.

Oh yes this is great please continue I want to see what he'll capture next!

Wow I've never seen the Doppledame yet but I like the breed so far and her tamer is already a candidate for the Darwin awards for underestimating an opponent blinded by stupidity.

Can't wait to see what happens next.
Cheers
Kmon13

Okay this story has gotten my full attention now... and adding it to my favs list since I don't see many stories with pokegirl tamers taking Hyperdolls so I'll keep reading more..

Until then Cheers.
Kmon13

Need to keep on this one mate