Bravo! Bravo! This was a wonderful story! Well done my friend! Well done!

This was very cute. Red felt really well written wanting to move on with life. Boxer hatred and anger seemed genuine.

Keep up the good work.

Nice chapter. Gotta agree with Boxer this is an incredibly bad idea. Probably going to end up with a told you so for him to her. Nice chapter. Looking forward to next chapter. Keep up the good work.

Fantastic chapter my favourite so far. Been in a situation like that before. They are quite cute together. Looking forward to next chapter. Keep up the good work.

She would slap him silly for thinking like that. Well written chapter. Looking forward to next chapter. Keep up the good work.

The ending was perfect to the chapter. It really offset the depressing moments. Looking forward to next chapter. Keep up the good work.

Great chapter. Good characterisation. Keep up the good work.

Fantastic chapter. Keep up the good work. All the best with your job.

The kiss was well worth the price of being on stage. They were quite cute. Looking forward to next chapter. Keep up the good work.

Intense chapter. Well written. Looking forward to next chapter. Keep the good work.

Nice chapter. Keep up the good work.

Very cute moment with the couple. Looking forward to next chapter. Keep up the good work.

Great chapter well written. Looking forward to next chapter. Keep up the good work.

Fantastic chapter. Really captures those moments they have together. Keep up the good work.

Very nice chapter. Well written. Good dialogue and characterisation. Keep up the good work.