Reviews for The First Time
doglord99 chapter 2 . 11/7/2019
please update this story
hexxim chapter 2 . 7/24/2018
This story is really good pls continue it
Yuna chapter 2 . 3/31/2018
It's sad this isn't continued if is really well written
Sanguinis13 chapter 2 . 3/19/2017
Good so far, hope you get back to it sometime.
thecatleader chapter 2 . 2/8/2017
I hope the name is UPDATE NOW please
Gerold chapter 2 . 2/1/2017
Hope you update this again please!
QuartSigma chapter 2 . 5/11/2016
Really nicely written! I hope you'll continue to update this because I'm really hooked to this story.
nburr16 chapter 2 . 4/17/2016
I highly dought this will get updated again but u should still update its a good plot
Scarlet88 chapter 2 . 3/23/2016
Its nice to read a good SAO time travel fic. Any chance you'll continue?
Guest chapter 2 . 7/7/2015
Could you continue this it would be a great story it has a great start
Zyrothe chapter 2 . 6/10/2015
Please update! this is really good, and i wanna read more.
Shimmer Stream chapter 2 . 4/12/2015
OMG They're LOOPING! Just kidding!
tf330129 chapter 2 . 12/29/2014
good story keep it up
Lunar Wave chapter 2 . 9/26/2014
Okay, I like the story so far, but the inconsistencies are jarring. Let's see:

Uh... Anneal Blade quest can be done repeatedly by anyone. It's not a one time thing. Kirito has like two Anneal Blades and Coper was also doing the Anneal Blade quest when Kirito was doing it so there really is no reason for there to be only one Anneal Blade. The Anneal Blade is also, while a good sword for beginning the game, is not good enough to be a one-time thing. It's the best sword in the first levels, and the only thing holding you back from getting it is the difficult quest.

One-time quests probably exist but I doubt it's most quests and most of those one-time quests probably will NOT be on the first floor. It's the beginning stage for heaven's sake. What would any new players say if they can't do quests that is known on the first floor? It's still convincingly designed to be a game after all.

The only limited resource known on the first floor is the spawn rate. The more monsters you kill, the less they spawn. Eventually the monsters would dwindle. That's why beta testers are so reviled. Because they know all the good hunting spots in the first few floors they'll be able to get to the monsters quicker and eventually hunt them to the ground.
MMC chapter 2 . 9/10/2014
Interesting story so far, please continue soon.
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