Reviews for i become such a monster when i miss you |
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![]() ![]() ![]() More Demma? Yay! I've really come to love this couple and you wrote them so well. I love how Emma wanted more from Dean yet he was just too scared. I also loved the Seth/Paige relationship, they're adorable and so weird, haha! Hope you write more. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, this was so wonderful! I was so pleased to see that you had decided to write more for the wrestling section - and especially for the Dean/Emma pairing! This was just amazing. I loved how you wrote each of the characters. The friendship and the romance and the drama... it was all just great! I hope you write more for WWE soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was so very cute, in a very awkward, avoidant, what-the-hell-are-feelings?, Dean kind of way. I particularly loved the asides in the brackets - I've seen some people argue that brackets can detract from the flow of a story, but I think that when used well they are very effective as a means to enhance it instead, and you've certainly used them to great effect here. In short: great work, A, definitely going on the faves list! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god, this was wonderful! Absolutely perfect! I was so happy reading it, and you wrote it so freaking well. I loved Emma wanting more and Dean just being scared shitless about it. I loved Dean's jealousy and Paige being so protective of Emma, ready to kick Dean's ass for making Emma cry. And of course, I loved the moment between Seth and Paige. So adorable! Aaannnddd, you mentioned Roman and Renee! Such a perfect one-shot. Thank you so much for writing it. Hopefully you'll write some more Demma in the future XD |