What a great story. Love the way you write these characters, they really come to life on the page.

Doesn't make sense because neither Jake or Duncan could out Clarence in regards to Aaron without outing their own involvement

Oh my gosh... love your story!

Happy ending *sigh

I was re-reading this story to pass the time until the announced premiere of season 4. Now, I am more glad than ever that I started. This is what should have happened. Thank you for putting this out there as you have no idea or maybe you do, just how much I need this right now.

VM was not just a show to me, it was way more than that. It truly saved me when I needed it the most. It taught me strength, but I still wished to see a HEA at some point. No one deserves a life of misery and disparity. And no matter how strong, everyone should get a chance at happiness.

Sorry, I am rambling. I just...

Anyway, thank you!

This is too good for mere words. It needs colours and feelings and sounds and
that heady rush of adrenalin that just takes your breath.

really good

Another brilliant story! I loved the mystery and how it was all plotted and eventually (duh!) discovered by Veronica with quite a bit of Logan's (Mac's!) help. The case being about Trina added another layer of urgency while forcing Logan to face his past which was great to read about even when it got angsty... And in the middle of all that, loved how you continued to show Logan and Veronica making progress with their relationship. Not always easy but they're setting the foundations for a strong long lasting marriage. It was not surprising but great to see Logan become such a devoted dad... His realisation of how much he had missed having a proper family life was heartbreaking at times but at least now, with Veronica, he's got it and he is making the most of it.

woot woot! i finished it. o

h man... i didn't see that coming - jake!

although what happened to trina?

awesome read by the way.

onto the next one - BABY TALK.

Loved the story!

Loved this!

The plot is really great so far - really impressed with the detail. Nice to see someone delving into Trina.
And talk about a blast from the past, it's like a episode of This is Your Life for Veronica haha.
Great dialogue too - witty and quick.

Dang! Trina actually managed to use some subtly and not produce the Aaron Echolls Epic. I guess if the story is about the mystery and solving it the script needed to be something that wouldn't make Logan punch all of Neptune, starting with Trina.

Knew it! It's the Aaron Echolls story, featuring Lilly Kane, with Connor Larkin starring as his former mentor. Am a close?

Great story. I really enjoyed this!