WOW. Just wow. I think I needed to fan myself for most of this chapter. I think LJ Smith would be so proud to read this! It felt like I was reading a mature version of her work. Nicely done! Can't wait for the next full chapter.

Ugh Tom! He just needs to go away for good haha

I really like your perspective on this! I totally agree with you that the games would have made Jenny more mature and strong

Update soon but take your time I want to read more

I'm so happy you're back! I'm so excited to see what you come up with next and I hope all is well with you! Awesome job writing Jenny by the way!

Yay so looking forward to the continuation of this story. I love the chemistry between Jenny and Julian and am looking forward to reading more.

Woo! I can't wait :) great to hear you are doing well!

This is so beautiful omg you really should update soon :D 3

Fan fictions for The Forbidden Game are kind of few and far between, especially those of this variety. I personally first read the books years and years ago (and all the fan fiction to match). Since then I've checked around every once in a while for new fan fiction. I recently reread the books again, and I just came here to say that this fan fiction makes me very happy. I find it very well-written, and have enjoyed the read so far. I hope that you continue this since it's the best fanfiction I've read in this format, with Julian coming back after this much time, and Jenny's reaction given the situation with Tom. A lot of the time it seems like people are comprising Jenny's stubbornness and strength in favor of plotting the outcome that they're going for, which is another one of the reasons why I think this fan fiction works so well with Jenny's personality in the books. Oh, and a side note, not that I'm holding it against you or anything but I think that update was postponed a bit farther out than a week. xD Anyways, great first couple chapters! Enjoyed the read, and will return when/if you post more.

Please, please, please continue this... I might die if it isn't continued

Okay I really hope you keep updating this because it is amazing. Your writing style is so smooth and has beautiful, captivating word choice. Julian is incredible, if not more sinful than he was in the books, so you've certainly done him justice. And I love the idea of him being so enraptured with an older Jenny. Great job and I can't wait for more :)

Update please!

Oh my god, I am in love with this story! You have to write more. You described everything so well and it's just torture to end it right when Julian comes back! Can't wait for an update! :)

I loved this. Even if you choose not to continue, I truly enjoyed this. It was well written yet sad. The ending was the best part.

I like where this is heading :) please change it from a one shot!