Enjoyed the read. This is a cool story

Ch:14
I must say that so far I have no complaints ... small errors or arguments that could be easily resolved, depending on the direction of the story. But this tires me, for starters, you do a too forced development. Why did you marry her if you did not reveal your identity? And if it was to "protect" him that he didn't, at least his abilities didn't matter if his family knew them. 9 ninjas that with a single movement could kill them. you make it look really stupid. And if your excuse is the end result of the chapter ... You would have at least 10 ways to get to the same development being much more realistic. You wanted Minato and Konan to be separated and his dead wife to give him the excuse to conflict for their revenge, and you needed it to be a village without much relevance. And what better than a village that does not exist in the future, right? ••• The same result is perfectly achieved if, for example, it happens when he was looking for supplies. and without the pathetic battle that was unnecessary. Who would have that mentality? Is it someone 3 millennia old?

I read this so long ago, but I still love it

Wow. This story really blew me away. This is the first time that I read a fic of this scale in two days. This story is right up there in my top three favorite fics ever. First being Fire and Blood, hehe

“I have no idea at what age that babies start remembering things or start to become aware, I'm just making it up in this story. So don't start firing off reviews about the baby wouldn't be self aware at that age, I'm just making this up. So anything else baby related, I'm just making it up.“

I wouldn’t really worry about this much, children in Naruto are not equal to children in our world. Itachi at four years old was able to kill an, albeit weakened, Chunin level ninja with ease

It’s kind of odd that Naruto struggled with them so much. I get that he wasn’t trying to kill Hashirama, though I don’t really get why he forgave him and Mito so easily, but to be caught off guard by their speed is odd when he could keep up with Hagoromo Otsutsuki and was able to kill Kaguya three centuries earlier.

The assassins creed hidden blade stuff felt silly to me, not gonna lie. Maybe I’ve just read too many shitty PJO fanfictions though

I’m guessing this is kind of like Canon Naruto’s Sage of Six Paths Mode on crack, with the universal understanding and what not

You did an amazing job the end confused me Just a little bit it was an amazing story the likes of which I’ll probably never read again.

wonderful story, beautiful ending

I loved it.

:)

The origin of the Maito family

Why did you have to kill them though?

Three words: Oh. My. God.
This was awesome, and I don't know what you have against your plot, but this story kept me glued to my laptop for two days straight (interrupted only by four hours of sleep). Which is rare, usually I'm quite good at pacing myself as university requires the majority of my attention.
I really, really, REALLY love this story, and despite 478k words, find myself craving for more (lol). This fic definitely goes onto my list for fics to re-read, even just two minutes after finishing it. Also, congratulations on writing almost 500k words, I abandoned my fic after only 50k.

im starting to think naruto is the avatar

Well shit, Naruto is pretty useless.