Reviews for Max
andjelija.nenic chapter 1 . 9/9/2019
Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$
someone chapter 1 . 4/9/2017
cool one. continue to update! cant wait to see next chap
Karlina101 chapter 1 . 1/31/2017
Oh this is cruel just giving us a tidbit I want to see where it goes from there!
acetwolf94 chapter 1 . 10/9/2016
ADD MORE PLEASE!
Kiraling chapter 1 . 4/28/2016
:( :( :(
fangirl718 chapter 1 . 8/17/2015
WOW
HotaruYagami chapter 1 . 5/28/2015
Oh my god... This is the first fanfiction that really made me cry... It is so beautiful and sad and I can definitely imagine Charles doing that to Erik.
Just perfect.
MoreThanMeetsTheEye96 chapter 1 . 12/15/2014
Wow, I really, really liked this story. It's really interesting and I feel the characters were really on point. Just, amazing! And I know you've probably been asked this numerous times, but are you thinking of maybe continuing this story idea or leaving it alone as a oneshot? I mean, I think it has a lot of potential, but even as a single one shot it is still great!
XxRin-sanxX chapter 1 . 12/1/2014
This needs a sequel! Very, very good Not much to say other than it was fantastic! :D

Rin
CyclopsForge chapter 1 . 11/25/2014
This is so good! When Charles had to erase Erik's memory, though, was very sad. It reminded me of that scene in Doctor Who when the Doctor wipes out Donna's memories. But eh, this is a very fantastic fanfic!
trustpixiedust chapter 1 . 11/1/2014
WHAT?! No, this is beyond everything that is okay right now. I am curled up in a little ball of pain. Erik. My darling Erik. I'm not okay. (Really well written by the way, I'm just too busy crying to comment on it)
Guest chapter 1 . 10/5/2014
Oh please, I want there to be more to this fic. "Max" must still be able to see the number tattooed on his arm. How does he make sense of it? Could it jog his memory?
CS90 chapter 1 . 8/20/2014
OMG i think that im gonna cry :( what a sad story. I like it but its so sad. Poor Erik and Charles.
weemcg33 chapter 1 . 7/22/2014
Wow! This blew me away. While in the movie Erik did frustrate me with his desicion making, it really hurt to read that Charles took everything away. And even though I know it was for the best, to save peoples lives, it was still very sad. Excellent story, any plans for more chapters?
Guest chapter 1 . 6/27/2014
The sound I let out when Erik begged him not to erase his memories of Charles wasn't even human. Will there be a sequel?! Maybe Charles and Raven visit where Max is every summer for a couple week or so. Everytime they do, maybe Max will remember bits and pieces of Erik's life?
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