i love it when is the next chapter

fun fact super buu is much stronger than ssj3 goku and kid buu and ssj3 goku are technically even and it is already proven in the anime although you may consider it filler

this is top notch and so exciting hope 4 another chapter
p.s have a merry christmas well when it comes

The story is good at least, why not add something that might surprise reader a bit within the story. Other then that, keep it up

Raditz's power level is OVER NINE THOUSAND

Awesome chapter! I love the story. And I can't wait for the next update! See ya later

I love this story please update I practically live for these updates.. Please update

I love it. Please update soon.

So, this fanfic so far is really good, although farfetchd it still really fun. But, I have to disagree with some things like:

1. Vegeta, he's way to kind to Cali, even when Trunks was a teenager Vegeta still a little distant

2. Gohan been a villan, I get that he is now been train by an evil Piccolo but I can't see Gohan as one of the bad guys, this part is really up to you, is my personal opinion mostly

3. Cali, she just forgot her real family, I understand that she "is" a Saiyan, but if she loves Vegeta and Kales why she doesn't at least of Goku? She saw him die, why she doesn't question that?

4. Z warriors, there is something bad happening on earth, and, knowing the power level situation they would be really, really weak. I mean, when Goku fought Nappa he was like 10,000 to 11,500 of power, but Cali is 100,000 that is alot, so, what's going on with the order warriors?

5. Dragonballs, right now, they're on Namek, once they realize the power of the Dragonballs what stop Vegeta from inmortality?

In conclusion, a good story but flawed. Good luck, I hope you're able to fix this mistakes. And don't think to much about my review, most of the point are opinions more than criticism.

The story is going pretty well, but I'm curious if Gochi, or who is now Cali will come back to her real family someday. I wonder how'll it would end up like, but I do enjoy the father-daughter relationship between Vegeta and her though. :)

Still loving it! I'm dying from the suspense! I can't wait for the next up date! ()

THE SUSPENSE!

I am great aren't i ;) lol jk!

I love this! This fix literally has become an addiction as I keep reading all the chapters! And its driving me insane cause I dying to know what happens next! Its brilliant and I glad that someone, you, had this idea because like I said, I love it!

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