finally one story where hiccup and stoick rly started with a good father-son bond instead of all hell having to broke lose for they to forge one bond

YOU MISSED FREYA

Nice touch! :3

uh, just so you know, if this story is done, I'd mark it as complete. Just a thought.

Thank you for putting this up!
Or I would never know the next one was up.

I bet that you and Endevorer would become best friends since in this story and his two story's the controlling dragon is good. Read Becoming the enemy if you haven't already o.k?

I'm loving this story, but I really hope you don't portray the queen as anything more than a manipulative and evil wench. I hate when stories try to fit redeeming qualities to her. It's like trying to fit a round peg into a square hole. It kind of seems like the arena dragons are stringing Hiccup along to drag him into the queen's circle of influence and I really hope that isn't the case.

I'm excited to see where this story goes. I like a long story as much as the next person, but I hope you don't let this drag too much. There's nothing worse than an author who insists on writing a long story and then peters out at 100k words without ever finishing it. Otherwise, keep up the good work!

Stop. Just stop right now. No need to continue being so freaking awesome. If you do, you're gunna create a black hole with the pure power if your skill. Don't create a black hole. They're not all that pleasant. Your story is already destroying my own little universe due to the fact that it's sucking me in closer and closer by the letters.

Thanks for mentioning me! It means a lot. Sorry that I really suck with my PMs. I usually have a lot of fanfiction. Net notifications so I just look for story names, thinkin half of it is follow or favorite notifications. Either way, just know that you're giving me an infinity in a limited number of chapters, and for that I'm eternally grateful (if you don't know that refrence, good for you. You don't have to cry now.).

Ps sorry for being so weird! .

Amazing story great job!

you missed the god Loki!

Yay! I love long stories! Tell us when the story's up!

Hah I'm glad I was able to help, I really need to compile a few ideas and send them your way.

And wow i really didn't know that i ended up making you rewrite the whole second part... Didn't see anything change but i haven't gotten any updates so *shrugs* maybe you can point em out so i can reread them if they are already in this story.

Or you meant in the second part as in the sequel.

And i kinda gave up with writing and im trying to work in the artistic waters more, Got myself a graphical tablet and all that, and let me tell you sheesh these things are expensive for people in Europe

I like the relationship between Astrid and Hiccup. I love the story.

This is very interesting. I liked how Astird didn't just pop out of no were and be friends. They talked, she heard what he said. Stoick feels very much like he should, and poor Hiccup.

I also liked how dragons didn't have names in here. Its very creative.

Looking forward to readin more.

Hope you update soon!:)